"Oh shit..." Lil Wayne lyric moments?

[TupacShaquer]

Freestyling has everything to do with intelligence lol, name a dumb nigga who freestyle good? Chief Keef?
Infact, intellegence has everything to do with being a lyricist.

I agree wayne gets some points with being able to think of some punchlines on the spot, but if u think abut it, its really not that hard, just think of something that relates to something else in some kinda way.

Ima think of one right now.

"Guns poppin like im cleaning up a birthday"

boom , when u clean up a birthday you gona pop them balloons and throw em away im clever

LMFAO

But I agree with you on the intelligence

But Wayne is pretty fucking clever tho.

[TinyPenisProductions]

Freestyling has everything to do with intelligence lol, name a dumb nigga who freestyle good? Chief Keef?
Infact, intellegence has everything to do with being a lyricist.

I agree wayne gets some points with being able to think of some punchlines on the spot, but if u think abut it, its really not that hard, just think of something that relates to something else in some kinda way.

Ima think of one right now.

"Guns poppin like im cleaning up a birthday"

boom , when u clean up a birthday you gona pop them balloons and throw em away im clever

Im not saying that you dont need intelligence, im saying that punchlines take way way more intelligence than flow and freestyling. Also your bar makes sense, now make brand new ones for at least 5000 more songs Thats what i mean, any nigga can flow to a beat, anyone. Now em can stay perfectly on flow, but its just timing. But doing flow and that clever shit in the countless amount of songs he has made, damn come on. Besides the point we cant make the two rappers take some bullshit IQ tests so if ya respond make it a closing statement.

[KidComet]

Im not saying that you dont need intelligence, im saying that punchlines take way way more intelligence than flow and freestyling. Also your bar makes sense, now make brand new ones for at least 5000 more songs Thats what i mean, any nigga can flow to a beat, anyone. Now em can stay perfectly on flow, but its just timing. But doing flow and that clever shit in the countless amount of songs he has made, damn come on. Besides the point we cant make the two rappers take some bullshit IQ tests so if ya respond make it a closing statement.

But Eminem isnt all flow and freeestyling? He rarely rhymes words with less then 2 syllables
and plus eminem vocabulary is higher than waynes.
Listen to Renegade or infinite,


Not to mention, i rarely see lil wayne rap rhymes within rhymes, something both kendrick and Eminem do, I do this too sometimes



His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but thewords won't come out


^Bruh.... He rhymed "Moms Spaghetti" with "on forgetting" like one whole bar away from each other. You feel me??
Anyalyze any of emiems lyrics, most are like this, I chose this song cause its popular.

Lets anyalyze Kendrick.


I woke up this morning and figured I'd call you In case I'm not here tomorrow
I'm hoping that I can borrow a piece of mind I'm behind on what's really important
My mind is really distorted I find nothing but trouble in my life I'm fortunate you believe in a dream
This orphanage we call a ghetto is quite a routine And last night was just another distraction
Or a reaction of what we consider madness I know exactly what happened


Rhymes within rhymes man.


Now lets analyze Lil wayne, Ill use one of my fave songs by him so you know im not being biased.

Cash Money Young Money motherfuck the other side
They can fuck with us if they want I bring 'em homicide
Word to my momma I'm gonna continue bombing
'Til they getting out the game it's like coming out of a coma
I'm trying... but I'm normal when this rap shit gets boring
All I ask is that you pray for me (please)
And the beat keep crying and I'm gonna keep beating her
Fee I'm fucking her I'm deep in her sleep in her
And what happens when the reaper come (huh?)

You see. so out of all 3 of these guys, whos rhymes are the most "clever"
Just cause lil wayne may use the freestyle, pause, freestyle pause method, doesnt mean he is more intelligent, its just means he dont like to take the time to write out his rhymes. He prolly likes to capture the raw emotion at the exact time he feels a certian beat, its just a technique he decides to use.

I used this technique as well, its fun, but my raps do come out less lyrical then when i sit down and write.

[TheePuppy]

Freestyling has everything to do with intelligence lol, name a dumb nigga who freestyle good? Chief Keef?
Infact, intellegence has everything to do with being a lyricist.

I agree wayne gets some points with being able to think of some punchlines on the spot, but if u think abut it, its really not that hard, just think of something that relates to something else in some kinda way.

Ima think of one right now.

"Guns poppin like im cleaning up a birthday"

boom , when u clean up a birthday you gona pop them balloons and throw em away im clever

Chief Keef can actual rap he chooses not to i saw an intervew where he Freestyled and he was actually good he said he chooses not to or somethin

[Iamhiph0p]

Out the window og my jet you see LA like a Bruin

when I noticed that line >>

[back on my bullish*t]

Now lets analyze Lil wayne, Ill use one of my fave songs by him so you know im not being biased.

Cash Money Young Money motherfuck the other side
They can fuck with us if they want I bring 'em homicide
Word to my momma I'm gonna continue bombing
'Til they getting out the game it's like coming out of a coma
I'm trying... but I'm normal when this rap shit gets boring
All I ask is that you pray for me (please)
And the beat keep crying and I'm gonna keep beating her
Fee I'm fucking her I'm deep in her sleep in her
And what happens when the reaper come (huh?)

You see. so out of all 3 of these guys, whos rhymes are the most "clever"
Just cause lil wayne may use the freestyle, pause, freestyle pause method, doesnt mean he is more intelligent, its just means he dont like to take the time to write out his rhymes. He prolly likes to capture the raw emotion at the exact time he feels a certian beat, its just a technique he decides to use.

I used this technique as well, its fun, but my raps do come out less lyrical then when i sit down and write.

smfh
why dont you do the verses from this song instead
Lil Wayne - No Quitter, Go Getter Lyrics

[WeEeEeEzZzZyYy]

Out the window og my jet you see LA like a Bruin

when I noticed that line >>

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/lil...ml#post1112558

oh and lol [MENTION=60086]KidComet[/MENTION] if he thinks wayne is not intelligent

[A$AP YAMS]

I lick her(liquor) so good she dont go around beer

[YoungTunechie]

Agreed people say Eminem is amazing lyricaly but wayne is the god at punchlines and wordplay etc, he would kill eminem when it comes to that

Did you know Eminem used to study the dictionary?

[LilMeazy]

Did you know Eminem used to study the dictionary?

Nothing wrong with that bro.

[YM Salute]

Freestyling has everything to do with intelligence lol, name a dumb nigga who freestyle good? Chief Keef?
Infact, intellegence has everything to do with being a lyricist.

I agree wayne gets some points with being able to think of some punchlines on the spot, but if u think abut it, its really not that hard, just think of something that relates to something else in some kinda way.

Ima think of one right now.

"Guns poppin like im cleaning up a birthday"

boom , when u clean up a birthday you gona pop them balloons and throw em away im clever

I aint wanna comment but Wayne's interviews alone show how well-spoken and intelligent he is. His fucking answers, even in some interviews currently, sound like some fucking Wisdom of the Day type shit. Wayne is intelligent as a person and when making his songs. Not knocking Em down but really man, the shit Wayne's done is insane. Yeah Eminem freestyles, that's mainly fast-paced thinking and being able to quickly grasp words to fit the situation which takes a lot of intelligence, but even with Wayne's lack of that form of freestyle, he has his own style and it's crazy what he comes up with.

But we not gonna have a damn discussion in this fucking thread about who the fuck is smarter make a different one

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Not to mention, i rarely see lil wayne rap rhymes within rhymes, something both kendrick and Eminem do, I do this too sometimes



His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but thewords won't come out


^Bruh.... He rhymed "Moms Spaghetti" with "on forgetting" like one whole bar away from each other. You feel me??
Anyalyze any of emiems lyrics, most are like this, I chose this song cause its popular.

See... Wayne's rhymes are basic? Try "Deathwish" with Jadakiss... And I've SEEN niggas point out "Oh Wayne forces words to rhyme" but when fucking Eminem rhymes "Spaghetti" with "forgetting" it's all cool. Hypocrites man. Anyway Wayne has several songs with rhyme schemes like that and "rhymes within rhymes".

Victory consistently, train all year to be the enemy’s misery
No stress visibly, neither does it enter me, I think positively
You can’t harm me mentally, not physically, not spiritually
You’ll never get rid of me, I am the epitome of this is what you did to me
Nothing’s what you did for me, nothing’s what you give to me
I take whatever I’m visioning, now break all of the limiting, now shake all of the gimmicking
The fakery, the trickery, nurse how sick is he, worse I’m sickening
I’ll be at the finish line first, how quick is he, I’m a make sure they mention me for the next century
I ain’t with the bickering, I’m full of dignity, I’m full of energy
Pull out the inner me or bull after dinner meat
I stood in the winter heat, it could be the end of me, but good be defending me

[TinyPenisProductions]

But Eminem isnt all flow and freeestyling? He rarely rhymes words with less then 2 syllables
and plus eminem vocabulary is higher than waynes.
Listen to Renegade or infinite,


Not to mention, i rarely see lil wayne rap rhymes within rhymes, something both kendrick and Eminem do, I do this too sometimes



His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready to drop bombs,
But he keeps on forgetting what he wrote down,
The whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but thewords won't come out


^Bruh.... He rhymed "Moms Spaghetti" with "on forgetting" like one whole bar away from each other. You feel me??
Anyalyze any of emiems lyrics, most are like this, I chose this song cause its popular.

Lets anyalyze Kendrick.


I woke up this morning and figured I'd call you In case I'm not here tomorrow
I'm hoping that I can borrow a piece of mind I'm behind on what's really important
My mind is really distorted I find nothing but trouble in my life I'm fortunate you believe in a dream
This orphanage we call a ghetto is quite a routine And last night was just another distraction
Or a reaction of what we consider madness I know exactly what happened


Rhymes within rhymes man.


Now lets analyze Lil wayne, Ill use one of my fave songs by him so you know im not being biased.

Cash Money Young Money motherfuck the other side
They can fuck with us if they want I bring 'em homicide
Word to my momma I'm gonna continue bombing
'Til they getting out the game it's like coming out of a coma
I'm trying... but I'm normal when this rap shit gets boring
All I ask is that you pray for me (please)
And the beat keep crying and I'm gonna keep beating her
Fee I'm fucking her I'm deep in her sleep in her
And what happens when the reaper come (huh?)

You see. so out of all 3 of these guys, whos rhymes are the most "clever"
Just cause lil wayne may use the freestyle, pause, freestyle pause method, doesnt mean he is more intelligent, its just means he dont like to take the time to write out his rhymes. He prolly likes to capture the raw emotion at the exact time he feels a certian beat, its just a technique he decides to use.

I used this technique as well, its fun, but my raps do come out less lyrical then when i sit down and write.

[MENTION=57220]YM Salute[/MENTION] said it for me