Wayne needs a storytelling song

[weezy f baby]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

Everybody has atleast one, even Gucci Mane. I can't consider Wayne up there wit Eminem, Nas, Jay-Z, Tupac, Biggie without a song that tells a legit story

Well you don't have to, no one cares if you do. Wayne is up there, if not beyond them. So whether YOU think he is or isn't doesn't matter because he is.

[nkflier23]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

You Fucking Serious?

9/10's Of The Song Was Talking About Catrina

1. Katrina has a K not a C

2. What the fk does talkin about Katrina have to do with it being a story?

Well you don't have to, no one cares if you do. Wayne is up there, if not beyond them. So whether YOU think he is or isn't doesn't matter because he is.

If no one cared then people wouldn't be in here and failing at provin me wrong and this thread wouldn't be on it's 3rd page. Wayne is no where near Biggie, Tupac, Nas, Jay-z or Eminem level yet. All of those greats mastered every level and degree of rap and Wayne has yet to, so fk outta here wit that blatant dickriding. All of them have a widely recognized classic album under their belts, Wayne again does not yet. All of them can tell GOOD stories, Wayne has yet to prove that he can.

Nigga if you can stand for your boyfriend to be criticized then gtfo my thread then

[Tech N9ne]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

Fresh's Blessing.

[marcusgettin]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

The guy who started this Thread should just be banned for a month.

[weezy f baby]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

1. Katrina has a K not a C

2. What the fk does talkin about Katrina have to do with it being a story?

Looks like you've never lost someone you've had feelings for. But then again, I forget trolls don't leave their rooms. Silly me.

[nkflier23]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

Looks like you've never lost someone you've had feelings for. But then again, I forget trolls don't leave their rooms. Silly me.

And I guess you never left your room to get an education and know what the fk a storytelling song is. Again WHAT THE FK DOES WYANE LOSING ANYBODY HAVE TO DO WITH IT BEING A STORY?

"Some say tragedy's hard to get over
But sometimes that tragedy means it's over
Soldier, from the academy league of rollers
I deny being down though they seem to hold us
My, shoulders are strong I prove 'em wrong
I ain't doing nothing but moving on
Let the truth be known
But they talked that freedom at us
And didn't even leave a ladder, damn
"

One of you dickriding dumasses show me the story within these lines

[marcusgettin]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

Dude just stop making dumb threads, I hope your shit gets locked. Wayne probably never made character stories but he made stories of his life with his music and thats what a true artist is.

[weezy f baby]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

And I guess you never left your room to get an education and know what the fk a storytelling song is. Again WHAT THE FK DOES WYANE LOSING ANYBODY HAVE TO DO WITH IT BEING A STORY?

"Some say tragedy's hard to get over
But sometimes that tragedy means it's over
Soldier, from the academy league of rollers
I deny being down though they seem to hold us
My, shoulders are strong I prove 'em wrong
I ain't doing nothing but moving on
Let the truth be known
But they talked that freedom at us
And didn't even leave a ladder, damn
"

One of you dickriding dumasses show me the story within these lines

I don't ride his dick, but I'll tell you whatcha wanna know.

That's explaining how his hometown of New Orleans got devastated by Katrina and how no one came to help them afterwards.


Also, how would it be that me not having an education make me not understand what a "storytelling" song is? Music doesn't interfere with education, unless it's what your studying. And I myself, am not. Therefore, your wrong. Again.

And by the looks of your spelling, your an elementary student with anger issues. Calm down, admit your wrong, move on.

[UnknownP]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

wayne tells stories his way, just as biggie and pac told em their way and jay-z and eminem tells em their way. you just can't compare the way they're telling their stories.
it's like comparing different tones of the same colour, every single one is red, but in their own way...

[nkflier23]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

I don't ride his dick, but I'll tell you whatcha wanna know.

That's explaining how his hometown of New Orleans got devastated by Katrina and how no one came to help them afterwards.


Also, how would it be that me not having an education make me not understand what a "storytelling" song is? Music doesn't interfere with education, unless it's what your studying. And I myself, am not. Therefore, your wrong. Again.

And by the looks of your spelling, your an elementary student with anger issues. Calm down, admit your wrong, move on.

See how fkin retarded you are? First of all before you try and criticize anybody's spelling learn the proper usage of "your" and "you're". Next, you dum ass that's the subject of the fkin song, just because a song has a subject does not mean it's a storytelling song. Do you know what a storytellign song is?

"I hear Brenda's got a baby
But, Brenda's barely got a brain
A damn shame
The girl can hardly spell her name
(That's not our problem, that's up to Brenda's family)
Well let me show ya how it affects the whole community
Now Brenda really never knew her moms and her dad was a
junky
Went in death to his arms, it's sad
Cause I bet Brenda doesn't even know
Just cause your in the ghetto doesn't mean ya can't grow
But oh, that's a thought, my own revelation
Do whatever it takes to resist the temptation
Brenda got herself a boyfriend
Her boyfriend was her cousin, now lets watch the joy end
She tried to hide her pregnancy, from her family
Who didn't really care to see, or give a damn if she
Went out and had a church of kids
As long as when the check came they got first dibs
Now Brenda's belly is gettin bigger
But no one seems to notice any change in her figure
She's 12 years old and she's having a baby
In love with the molester, who's sexing her crazy
And yet she thinks that he'll be with her forever
And dreams of a world with the two of them are together,
whatever
He left her and she had the baby solo, she had it on the
bathroom floor
And didn't know so, she didn't know, what to throw away and
what to keep
She wrapped the baby up and threw him in the trash heep
I guess she thought she'd get away
Wouldn't hear the cries
She didn't realize
How much the the little baby had her eyes
Now the baby's in the trash heep balling
Momma can't help her, but it hurts to hear her calling
Brenda wants to run away
Momma say, you makin' me lose pay, the social workers here
everyday
Now Brenda's gotta make her own way
Can't go to her family, they won't let her stay
No money no babysitter, she couldn't keep a job
She tried to sell crack, but end up getting robbed
So now what's next, there ain't nothing left to sell
So she sees sex as a way of leaving hell
It's paying the rent, so she really can't complain
Prostitute, found slain, and Brenda's her name, she's got a baby"


Is a storytelling song, it has a plot, it has a climax and it has a ending. Tie My Hands has NONE of that, it just has a subject. It's a shame you claim to be so educated but i had to break this down for you, dickrider.

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wayne tells stories his way, just as biggie and pac told em their way and jay-z and eminem tells em their way. you just can't compare the way they're telling their stories.
it's like comparing different tones of the same colour, every single one is red, but in their own way...

No, all their stories are told the same way. The all have plots, climaxes and endings. The "color tone" comparison only comes in when discussing the kind of story it is.

"As I was beatin on a cop, I heard a gun click (uh-ohh)
Then the gun shot, but I wasn't hit
I turned around it was my homie with the gun in hand
He shot the cop (damn!) now he's a dead man
I said, come on, it's time for us to get away
(Let's go, we gotta get the fuck outta here)
They called for backup, and they'll be on their way
Jumped in the car, and tried to get away quick
The car wouldn't start (damn!) we in deep shit
So we jumped out (C'mon let's take the cop's car)
We drove a little ways thinkin that we got far
But I looked up, and all I saw was blue lights
If I die tonight, I'm dying in a gunfight
I grabed the AK, my homie took the 12 gauge
Load em up quick, it's time for us to spray
We'll shoot em up with they own fuckin weapons
And when we through sprayin (audi) then we steppin
This is a lesson, to the rednecks and crooked cops
You fuck with real niggaz, get ya fuckin ass dropped
So here we go, the police against us
Dark as dusk, waitin for the guns to bust (What's next man?)
What's next, I don't know and I don't care
One things fo' sho', tommorrow I won't be here
But if I go, I'm takin all these punks with me
Pass me a clip G, now come and get me
You wanna sweat me, never get me to be silent
Givin them a reason, (a reason) to claim that I'm violent..."

This has a plot, climax and ending. Thus making it a story

"Left the house, pullin' out the drive backin' out
Need a backin' out this lady's Jag started blackin' out
Pulled the Mac-10 out, stuck it in her face
Shut ya yackin' mouth before I blow the brain from out the back ya scalp
Drug her by her hair, smacked her up
Thinkin' fuck it, mug her while you're there, jacked her up
Stole her car, made a profit
Grabbed the tape from out the deck and offed it out the window
Like the girl on Set It Off did
Jetted off kid, stole the whip, now I'm a criminal
Drove in thru somebody's yard, dove into they swimmin' pool
Climbed out and collapsed on the patio
I made it out alive but I'm injured badly though
Parents screamin': "Son, go in and call the police
Tell 'em there's a crazy man disturbing all of the peace!"
Tried to stall him at least long enough to let me leap up
Run in they crib and at least leave with some little cheap stuff
Actin' like they never seen nobody hit a nick before
Smashed the window, grabbed the Nintendo 64
When they sell out in stores the price triples
I ran up the block jumpin' kids on tricycles
And colliding with an 80-year old lady with groceries
There goes the cheese, eggs, milk and Post Toasties
Stood up and started to see stars
Too many siren sounds, it seemed like a thousand police cars
Barely escaped, must-a been some dumb luck
Jumped up and climbed the back of a movin' dump truck
But I think somebody seen me maybe
Plus I lost the damn Nintendo and I must-a dropped the Beanie Baby
Fuck it I give up, I'm surrounded in blue suits
Came out with a white flag hollerin' "TRUCE TRUCE!"
Surrendered my weapon to cops
Wasn't me! It was the gangsta rap and the peppermint Schnopps"


This is a story, it has a plot, climax and ending


"Who the fuck is this?
pagin me at 5:46 in the mornin crack a dawnin
now I'm yawnin, wipe the cold out my eye
see who's this pagin me and why..
It's my nigga Pop from the barbershop
told me he was in the gamblin spot and heard the intricate plot
some niggas wanna stick you like fly paper neighbour
slow down love please chill drop the caper
remember them niggas from the hill up in Brownsville
that you rolled dice wit
smoked the blunts and got nice wit
yeah my nigga Fame up in Prospect
nah dem my niggas nah love wouldn't disrespect
I didn't say dem,
they schooled me to some niggas
that you knew from back when,
when you was clockin minor figures
Now they heard you blowin up like nitro
know they wanna stick the knife
through your windpipe slow..
so thank Fame for warnin me now I'm warnin you
you got the mac nigga
tell me what you wanna do.."


IS A STORY

[YoungTune.]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

Me > everything








/thread
/discussion
/life

[weezy f baby]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

See how fkin retarded you are? First of all before you try and criticize anybody's spelling learn the proper usage of "your" and "you're". Next, you dum ass that's the subject of the fkin song, just because a song has a subject does not mean it's a storytelling song. Do you know what a storytellign song is?

"I hear Brenda's got a baby
But, Brenda's barely got a brain
A damn shame
The girl can hardly spell her name
(That's not our problem, that's up to Brenda's family)
Well let me show ya how it affects the whole community
Now Brenda really never knew her moms and her dad was a
junky
Went in death to his arms, it's sad
Cause I bet Brenda doesn't even know
Just cause your in the ghetto doesn't mean ya can't grow
But oh, that's a thought, my own revelation
Do whatever it takes to resist the temptation
Brenda got herself a boyfriend
Her boyfriend was her cousin, now lets watch the joy end
She tried to hide her pregnancy, from her family
Who didn't really care to see, or give a damn if she
Went out and had a church of kids
As long as when the check came they got first dibs
Now Brenda's belly is gettin bigger
But no one seems to notice any change in her figure
She's 12 years old and she's having a baby
In love with the molester, who's sexing her crazy
And yet she thinks that he'll be with her forever
And dreams of a world with the two of them are together,
whatever
He left her and she had the baby solo, she had it on the
bathroom floor
And didn't know so, she didn't know, what to throw away and
what to keep
She wrapped the baby up and threw him in the trash heep
I guess she thought she'd get away
Wouldn't hear the cries
She didn't realize
How much the the little baby had her eyes
Now the baby's in the trash heep balling
Momma can't help her, but it hurts to hear her calling
Brenda wants to run away
Momma say, you makin' me lose pay, the social workers here
everyday
Now Brenda's gotta make her own way
Can't go to her family, they won't let her stay
No money no babysitter, she couldn't keep a job
She tried to sell crack, but end up getting robbed
So now what's next, there ain't nothing left to sell
So she sees sex as a way of leaving hell
It's paying the rent, so she really can't complain
Prostitute, found slain, and Brenda's her name, she's got a baby"


Is a storytelling song, it has a plot, it has a climax and it has a ending. Tie My Hands has NONE of that, it just has a subject. It's a shame you claim to be so educated but i had to break this down for you, dickrider.

Touch� on that one. But, I'm pretty sure I'm not a "fkin retard", you couldn't spell dumbass right, so it's even.

But, back on topic. Who really cares? lol

Your whole argument is that you wont' consider Lil' Wayne a great artist without a "storytelling" song. He has some, like previously posted. It's just the way you interpret it, Tie My Hands, Something You Forgot, Pray to the Lord. Three great examples.

It may not be a DIRECT story like the one you posted, but all those songs have a plot, climax, and ending.
Also, I never "claimed" to be "so educated", I was just pointing out your flaws. I'm not a "dickrider", just someone who has been a fan longer than you.