I like vs threads, your point?
But yeah I figured this is actually not bad, so which one do you prefer? This is hard for me to choose... I liked the flow in pt. 2, but something about pt. 1 catches my attention, so I'm undecided lol but if I had to choose I guess I'd go with pt. 2
Noticeable lines to me:
Pt. 1 - "My bullets come with wings and yo' cerebellum could fly"
Pt. 2 - "Do I go in or I go in? I'm not your friend, I'm not your kin; I'll make your brain come out your chin"
You could post why and some lines or some shit you liked from both or something
But yeah I figured this is actually not bad, so which one do you prefer? This is hard for me to choose... I liked the flow in pt. 2, but something about pt. 1 catches my attention, so I'm undecided lol but if I had to choose I guess I'd go with pt. 2
Noticeable lines to me:
Pt. 1 - "My bullets come with wings and yo' cerebellum could fly"
Pt. 2 - "Do I go in or I go in? I'm not your friend, I'm not your kin; I'll make your brain come out your chin"
You could post why and some lines or some shit you liked from both or something
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