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That's only the very beginning. For example, the next time he comes back with that same scheme
paper/hoes/drive/road he uses the same rhyme scheme and same order of topics, it's:
All I know is strippers. / All they know is poles. PUSSY (again) / soul. Zero to sixty (driving again) And then! he ties in the paper ($) with the rolls (of money) but also pun on Rolls(-Royce)...that bitch got double doors (a safe and a Rolls Royce).
While not his longest rhymes, many of his best and most lauded sequences are strings of five syllables, like
Played like an accordion / Jane I'm your Tarzan / Lebron James if he's Jordan etc etc
Well, in this song it's "Two hoes on my arm / Fur boots when it's warm / Church shoes to play ball / Bird food to a dog / Urkel to Big Carl"
Then on top of the puns, rhyming, parallel structure, he has this very real life story about shooting himself contrasted with the frivolous pursuit of $ and bitches. Oh and clever one-liners, built on very common phrases (not contrived like other rappers) that also rhyme:
All my niggas rest in peace, and my enemies rest pleasant.
So when my niggas creep, catch 'em when they least expect it.
Mama told me if you run these streets, run these streets correctly.
Feet don't fail me now; I've never known my feet to test me.
Correct / fail / test.
Then a tribute to the officer who rescued him. It's incredible rhyming, puns and wordplay all at the same time that isn't forced. It's natural language, common expressions paired ingeniously. It has the standard brags but also real heartfelt sentiment and story from his life.
That's why it's his best song. Again, only scratching the surface of the details in the song. Every few lines are at least that dense.
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Not to mention the sick flo in there before the end, which he often doesn't do at all in a song.
paper/hoes/drive/road he uses the same rhyme scheme and same order of topics, it's:
All I know is strippers. / All they know is poles. PUSSY (again) / soul. Zero to sixty (driving again) And then! he ties in the paper ($) with the rolls (of money) but also pun on Rolls(-Royce)...that bitch got double doors (a safe and a Rolls Royce).
While not his longest rhymes, many of his best and most lauded sequences are strings of five syllables, like
Played like an accordion / Jane I'm your Tarzan / Lebron James if he's Jordan etc etc
Well, in this song it's "Two hoes on my arm / Fur boots when it's warm / Church shoes to play ball / Bird food to a dog / Urkel to Big Carl"
Then on top of the puns, rhyming, parallel structure, he has this very real life story about shooting himself contrasted with the frivolous pursuit of $ and bitches. Oh and clever one-liners, built on very common phrases (not contrived like other rappers) that also rhyme:
All my niggas rest in peace, and my enemies rest pleasant.
So when my niggas creep, catch 'em when they least expect it.
Mama told me if you run these streets, run these streets correctly.
Feet don't fail me now; I've never known my feet to test me.
Correct / fail / test.
Then a tribute to the officer who rescued him. It's incredible rhyming, puns and wordplay all at the same time that isn't forced. It's natural language, common expressions paired ingeniously. It has the standard brags but also real heartfelt sentiment and story from his life.
That's why it's his best song. Again, only scratching the surface of the details in the song. Every few lines are at least that dense.
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Not to mention the sick flo in there before the end, which he often doesn't do at all in a song.
this shit is laughable , if u watch battle rap shit liek this would get booed
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