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Sup guys, i'm a new rapper and I just want some feedback on what i can do better. Thanks in advance if you can.
- Swagga Like Us -
yea, fuck a hoe get ya dough, woah
i could leave ya crew wet like i put a bullet hole in ya boat
and the c4 for the peephole in the door
so the people who peep gon' explode
yea, i stay strapped like a war
make you go left up down right like a code
a real nigga never tell the shit that he was told
im lookin for a hoe with a tongue like a toad
im in the movie game, hop out do the thang
shoot the thang, nigga turn ya house to a shootin range
hes a tool guy thinkin hes a cool guy
april fools nigga you a bullseye
full nine wit a silencer no sound
turn every city in ya coast to a ghost town
i'm from the west coast nigga i dont smke brown
i'm to fast for you rap niggas slow down
- Swagga Like Us -
yea, fuck a hoe get ya dough, woah
i could leave ya crew wet like i put a bullet hole in ya boat
and the c4 for the peephole in the door
so the people who peep gon' explode
yea, i stay strapped like a war
make you go left up down right like a code
a real nigga never tell the shit that he was told
im lookin for a hoe with a tongue like a toad
im in the movie game, hop out do the thang
shoot the thang, nigga turn ya house to a shootin range
hes a tool guy thinkin hes a cool guy
april fools nigga you a bullseye
full nine wit a silencer no sound
turn every city in ya coast to a ghost town
i'm from the west coast nigga i dont smke brown
i'm to fast for you rap niggas slow down