Famous Fame (Whole first verse!)

[ProBitaz.]

I posted this some month ago, and I've now got one verse done.
Watcha think? (The last one ended at Outcast)

Famous Fame

I’m an addict to attics
cause I like to be on top
not like sex more like rap and hip-hop
let me hop over you ‘till “drop”
cause you’re also an addict
I know that I’m sick
but not quite-like-that-sick
that shit, is nothing for me, no
the fame is my drug
and I get it for free
and I don’t wanna be a clown like I-T
that I know for show’
and this album slash CD is gonna blow
it’s gonna sell like dough
it’s gonna grow like “green”
and green like go
hold’ up like stop
It’s going to fast
and this isn’t a whole verse
it’s just an outcast
Those lines where made fast
this rap was made slow
I try to keep on top
but it’s hard when I drop it low
drop it down to the flo’
pop it up to the top
we go from top to bottom
but we still got ‘em
we be getting’ money from ‘em
without even rope ‘em
money from ya pocket
the money from, ya safe
even if ya go lock it
you money ain’t safe!

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