alright so i've noticed that my last thread was thrown in the trash, apparently i broke some rules. didn't know that, but i've read them this time and i think i'll do it correct this time
orginal version:
"they call me mr. hyde, but i don't see why,
but i'mma be me, and let you gentlemen decide
but you bitches better be thankful, unless you want a meeting with jekyll
i don't curse a lot, shit,
but my truth is so true it should be tagged explicit
i've got some problems, but i don't got a bitch to blame them on
dudes on the corner, no one has a swagger like moi,
i know who i am, et toi?`
if you wanna know who i am,
read my shoes or my hat,
fitted says the greatest and shoes say my name,
but i listen to both, i'm true to myself, that something you forgot
as i said, i got that swagger, something you lost,
i'm a beast, in other words, something you're not
i've got those bars, hm, something you want
i speak the truth, something you don't
live life and never let the life live you,
you don't get it but you know that it's true
i'm a beast, shit i already said it
hm, i'm a fresh prince, call me will smith,
not really my scene, so i rewrite the script"
edited version: (better or worse?)
"they call me mr. hyde, but i don't see why,
but i'mma be me, and let you gentlemen decide
you bitches better be thankful, unless you want a meeting with jekyll
i don't curse a lot, shit,
but my truth is so true it should be tagged explicit
drop the chit-chat baby, i care more about your tits
fools on the corner, no one with a swagger like me
you got three seconds to disappear, one two three
there's two sides of everything, but you've already met mine
if time is money, well then i ain't got time
i might got a couple of minutes, but i'm spendin it on rhymes
i'm true to myself, that something you forgot
i got that swagger, something you lost,
i'm a beast, in other words, something you're not
i've got those bars, hm, something you want
i speak the truth, something you don't
i'm something new, i'm like bluray and you're the dvd,
you can try forever but you'll never could come close to me
i'll take you to the pawn shop, but you bitches ain't worth shit
i am the legend, call me will smith,
this is not my scene, so i rewrite the script"
feedback links:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/t22226/
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/t22467/
orginal version:
"they call me mr. hyde, but i don't see why,
but i'mma be me, and let you gentlemen decide
but you bitches better be thankful, unless you want a meeting with jekyll
i don't curse a lot, shit,
but my truth is so true it should be tagged explicit
i've got some problems, but i don't got a bitch to blame them on
dudes on the corner, no one has a swagger like moi,
i know who i am, et toi?`
if you wanna know who i am,
read my shoes or my hat,
fitted says the greatest and shoes say my name,
but i listen to both, i'm true to myself, that something you forgot
as i said, i got that swagger, something you lost,
i'm a beast, in other words, something you're not
i've got those bars, hm, something you want
i speak the truth, something you don't
live life and never let the life live you,
you don't get it but you know that it's true
i'm a beast, shit i already said it
hm, i'm a fresh prince, call me will smith,
not really my scene, so i rewrite the script"
edited version: (better or worse?)
"they call me mr. hyde, but i don't see why,
but i'mma be me, and let you gentlemen decide
you bitches better be thankful, unless you want a meeting with jekyll
i don't curse a lot, shit,
but my truth is so true it should be tagged explicit
drop the chit-chat baby, i care more about your tits
fools on the corner, no one with a swagger like me
you got three seconds to disappear, one two three
there's two sides of everything, but you've already met mine
if time is money, well then i ain't got time
i might got a couple of minutes, but i'm spendin it on rhymes
i'm true to myself, that something you forgot
i got that swagger, something you lost,
i'm a beast, in other words, something you're not
i've got those bars, hm, something you want
i speak the truth, something you don't
i'm something new, i'm like bluray and you're the dvd,
you can try forever but you'll never could come close to me
i'll take you to the pawn shop, but you bitches ain't worth shit
i am the legend, call me will smith,
this is not my scene, so i rewrite the script"
feedback links:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/t22226/
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/t22467/