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    (Verse 1)

    last night I had a dream I woke up next to a angle on top of the moon
    laying on ten king size beds but there was no room
    the stars began speaking to me they say i fell from sky onto this planet
    I felt these stars spoke the truth so I didn't panic
    instead i did the opposite of titanic
    I became a warrior a titan
    standing taller then the highest mountain still fighten
    melting my thoughts onto yours
    this is my life I took a vow to never divorce
    mirror shattered on the floor
    next to a puddle of crystal water
    these thoughts are killing me, my minds being slaughtered
    I took an oath to the reflection of my past
    I became the first one to last

    (talking)
    Looking for my self and I found more
    this world is full house and im walking out the back door


    (Verse 2)

    jumping from the top of a cloud
    watch as I dive into the bottom of the ocean
    silent and lonely here, no ones a loud(allowed)
    this crystal clear place is my devotion
    I can feel the cold rush in the water
    becoming one with the water
    and two with you
    she begins to grasp my body to the fullest
    hold on tight the angels about to pull us
    flying out of the ocean through the white and blue
    questioning where we are going without a single clue
    lips locked not wasting a single drop of this unexplainable taste
    tears running down from each others face
    our backs to the world just us there's no more space.


    rate one out of ten, and what can I do better?
    Last edited by rebirth-of-autotune; 07-17-2011, 02:26 AM.
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