I gave it a try... laugh, cry, joke.. idc XD! i laughed

[KasualyFamouz]

Edit: oh btw click the picture of the city for the audio

I'm feindin' and scrapin'
Like the sides of that pussy
pussy ass nikkuh cant fawk with me
like chastity i am the key
tell ya what, get between her knees
make her scream for my cream
she tasteyyy aha ice cream
lick around her belly ring
step up to my ring
pussy come back no ring
There she is a' knocking
Wishin i was a rocking herrr
she just keep commin back
call dat bitch cancerrr
After done it's disasterrr
I'm a beast, a boss and a masterr
Daddy to dem bitches juuust ask her
She swallow dem baby's
like a motha fuckin massacre
my lil trooper my lil soldier
she take it drill by drill
She calls me mr. trill
She say she got broken heart
says she needs to heeeel
poor damn bitch
all I can tell her is
but my love is just toooooo damn

ehhh got bored... wrote sum bars wanted to perform them... not very well but i tried

[Dino]

Re: I gave it a try... laugh, cry, joke.. idc XD! i laughed

I would advise reading the rules at the top of the page.

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Re: I gave it a try... laugh, cry, joke.. idc XD! i laughed

You gave it a try ... and failed. Arrh just kidding, just keep practicing, then suddenly it's there!