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  • Where's Wayne . Verse By Mikee . (15 Yrs Old)

    Ok this is my first rhyme posted on the internet so just give your honest opinion about it. Im trying to become a rapper so I guess this is how I get my shit out there.

    INSTRUMENTAL: Where's Wayne - Young Money

    YOUTUBE LINK: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I0q3crgDLds


    (First & Only Verse)

    bugati missing from the lot and i bet wayne wus in it
    tried to call his phone but i forgot i had no minutes
    wen i catch him ima deck him
    boxing gloves on though
    hands so fast they call me mr semi auto
    matta fact i think i got it
    hes probbly on an island
    speed boat flying goin 120 miles
    and since he is a monsta
    hes probbly in a cave with a body on his plate
    ketchup packet in his pocket
    helichopper on deck
    bout the size of a tank
    blades spin so fast turn you into ground beef
    throw some noodles at cha
    blood plus the fetty
    hit chu with a plate & call you human spagetti
    but back to lil wayne
    he owe me 10 dollas
    and im gonna break night till im dead or till i find him
    but can you do me somthin
    if you see a million dollar man in a bugati can you call back this number?
    GUCCI !

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    Re: Where's Wayne . Verse By Mikee . (15 Yrs Old)

    If ya really tryin' 2 be a rapper, then it's not good .. But if it's just a fast post, then it's aight.

    3/5
    Last edited by ProBitaz.; 07-28-2010, 06:56 PM.

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    • #3
      Re: Where's Wayne . Verse By Mikee . (15 Yrs Old)

      Semi auto can be slow or fast depending on the person, I would've said Full auto.
      Stating the obvious that he's on an island could've been cut.
      Wayne's not a monsta
      the transition back to 'wayne' wasn't smooth.
      gucci..oh no...

      Edit: it's better than a-bjerg's so don't worry about his ass wiping toilet paper soft ass lyrics.

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      • #4
        Re: Where's Wayne . Verse By Mikee . (15 Yrs Old)

        Originally posted by KrispyKreme View Post
        Semi auto can be slow or fast depending on the person, I would've said Full auto.
        Stating the obvious that he's on an island could've been cut.
        Wayne's not a monsta
        the transition back to 'wayne' wasn't smooth.
        gucci..oh no...

        Edit: it's better than a-bjerg's so don't worry about his ass wiping toilet paper soft ass lyrics.
        What? Do ya wanna get banned! ?

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        • #5
          Re: Where's Wayne . Verse By Mikee . (15 Yrs Old)

          Please read the rules for Tha Studio.

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