Life That I Know

[JayBabyyy]

Sometimes I wanna go right back to my past
It feels like I'm on a race for survival and I'm just reaching last
More of this and that, memories keep my past coming back
Everything just died out, its like the world is having a heart attack.. (Pause)
Man my mind is turning to a black hole
My brain is getting eaten like a fucking rat show
Sipping my life away, wondering why is that slow..
You see, my life has been a bitch lately
Everybody is turning against me, no one is here to save me
No one is here to guide me, or help me on my way
Shit happened so fast, its still trapped in mind today
Sometimes I think what would change if I pray..
I sit outside and watch the stars go by
People have never even had the chance to say a friendly goodbye

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Life That I Know

Flow: was not that bad bro, sounds like it came from the heart, i like that
Lyrics: weren't too GREAT, but they were good to me, cuz they seemed real
Other: dont go tooooo deep tho bro, it'll seem like you're trying to hard
Overall: 3.5/5

[JayBabyyy]

Re: Life That I Know

Flow: was not that bad bro, sounds like it came from the heart, i like that
Lyrics: weren't too GREAT, but they were good to me, cuz they seemed real
Other: dont go tooooo deep tho bro, it'll seem like you're trying to hard
Overall: 3.5/5

Thanks but that wasn't me. It was one of my friends.

[ProBitaz.]

Re: Life That I Know

U are missin' feedback.. It's gon' get locked if ya don't post em in a hurry..

[moneymarc454]

Re: Life That I Know

Flow: it sounded smooth
Lyrics: here and there your lyrics was okay.
Other: keep working at it
Overall: 3.0/5

[Brennan]

Re: Life That I Know

Seemed like your friend was coming from the heart,and not just saying bs,it went good then you went into a filler like rat show.
If he would slow down and think a second he would've prob thought up something better then that,anyways good job.

[MiSSTHR33]

Re: Life That I Know

it sounds alright man.