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  • Up In Flames/Watch The Rain (Feat. Premium)

    A song I recently featured on with a pretty dope rapper named Premium. I'm on 2nd verse.
    YouTube - Up In Flames - Premium Ft Satire

    That was repayment for a feature he gave me a few weeks earlier on a song I made.
    YouTube - Watch The Rain

    *Lyrics to Up In Flames*
    Premium:
    I feel like im goin up in flames
    stuck in frames cuz the picture never fuckin change
    cuz i could walk a thousand miles an never arrive
    how the fuck am i gettin noticed in little ri
    "homie why do you try" its for me homie u know this
    the climbin fanbase on my page is jus a bonus
    ive never got emotions out in any other way
    the other day i was readin shit from the fourth grade
    an it was sloppy couldnt fully read the handcock
    somethin bout a big bully in the sandbox
    damn man i really miss those days
    not a care in the world only wishin to play
    now im usin hip hop in a medicinal way
    try to get this shit off my chest id typically say
    fuck you to every singe kid i was told to ether
    i dont blame wayne for droppin worlds i wouldnt hold it either

    Me:
    Early morning, wake up, eyelids just open
    Walk to the door, there's an eviction notice
    Huh, yeah, That's fucking great
    Now I know why syko said "World's up in Flames"
    Nothing but the same, Bullshit
    All over again, home disowned again
    Phoned a friend, He's smoking spliffs
    Said he's homeless, We both broke as shit
    Minimum's wage got my adrenaline caged
    I'm finally starting to feel Eminem's Rage
    This pen to a page just ain't getting me paid
    Youtube ain't exactly how a legend is made
    I'd much rather lay under, dead in a grave
    Than live another day as a peasant and slave
    These pensions just ain't, nough for rent to just stay
    plus keep me fed for the day, this world's been
    embedded in flames

    Premium:
    now we could play the blame game but the same lame claims he had nothin to do with it
    so who is it who lit the wick an kicked the shit into the clique of kids with ideas
    right here jus take it on cuz would never make a song for no reason
    either teasin or pleasin the fees an bills are teamin to kill ive seen it but still
    its so crazy people try to play me act shady but mainly its eighty ladys hittin guys wit fatalitys
    but whats worse then that is one lady with eighty mother fuckin personalities
    its so crazy to write, im leavin later tonight, hit the staircase of heavin i could save ya a flight
    cuz this worlds a bit to hot for my likin, coppin a mic an, strikin the heart jus like lightnin
    so while im fightin in the booth, talkin to youth ill never stop recording this track
    even tho i feel the flames meltin the walls schorin my back

    *Lyrics to Watch The Rain*
    [Verse 1: Me]
    I learned the term
    God given talent teh minute I started rappin
    The fatherless bastard with artistic heart of Passion
    As each song was crafted, Just the sense of it
    Kept me going, may not be golden but my friends love it
    I did to impress, anyone who would listen to
    From family, to internet, your girlfriend, if she's cute
    Don't think anybody knew how this could end
    From being last picked to your fav rapper's top 10
    From being that one kid in the back of the class
    To peeps asking when we'll do a track and collab
    From baggy and ashy to slightly tighter pants
    Sad to say bye to rags but hello designer brands
    Yeah I know the deal
    Probably saying "Good lyrics" but my flow's off still
    Keep bitching, keep whining, keep talking all your hate
    I'll just keep walking in the rain to wash it all away

    *Chorus*

    [Verse 2: Premium]
    Its like i got some mechanaical arms
    you can stand it cuz im plannin to bomb
    on everybody cuz im, not stoppin till im dead in the grave
    an even then ill be ahead of the game, im lettin the pain
    build until you see it in my heart and my mind
    portray it in a way that will start wit a rhyme
    an then
    end it wit tears in everybodys eyes
    you aint need an md to know that everybody lies
    but in my House ya know evertyhing i flow
    is realness an even tho ya feelin this im dealess
    not profitable...you cant market me so ya target me
    quick to quesstimates an hypothesese
    its hard to be, a young rapper with a message
    cuz every single one of my morals have been tested
    an the pen never rested on a paper
    so if ya down in ya mind, hear my rhyme homie lemme save ya

    *Chorus*
    [Verse 3: Me]
    Rudy Yo Wassup
    Little Nick And Cole have both grown up
    Jazz always said I would if I could hold it sober
    Now I got Hip Hop on my fucking roller coaster
    Picked myself off the ground, then look where I'm now
    Try doing what I do through some football try outs
    Leaving this dry town and expanding farther
    This game feels like I'm turning from fan to starter
    And I don't mess around with this grade chicks
    Shit, Not since I ended up on chick's play lists
    Still getting dates from chicks who'd give rain checks
    Before, I was just broke, now I'm inner state rich
    Yeah I know the deal
    Prolly saying "Good concept" but wasn't spoken real
    Haters hurt before, but they shot with blank shots, now
    and now I'm top of the world, watching rain fall down
    Last edited by Ink; 09-05-2010, 05:13 AM.
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  • #2
    Re: Up In Flames/Watch The Rain (Feat. Premium)

    Satire? Why you leave tr?

    Anyway, I didn't know you rapped but you're pretty good. You got a pretty good and original voice. Flow was kind of iffy at some points just keep working on that. I like your style though, you got talent.

    http://www.youtube.com/SentusMusic
    http://www.facebook.com/SentusMusic7

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