Forever Remix

[indiglo09]

Hey whats up, this is our first track. Check it out nd we're lookin for feedback peace http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DLUyCrUnoNI

[ATLien666]

Re: Forever Remix

Flow- Was horrible, from all verses.

Lyrics- The first guy, Pyro, ig, was the only okay part. I could barely hear the third guy, mainly because of the effect he used, but what I did hear was semi-decent.

Other- The chorus was ehh, but it wasn't the worst I've heard.

Overall- 1/5

If this was your first song, it was a mediocre attempt; try to improve your flow, and lyrics.

[indiglo09]

Re: Forever Remix

thanks for the feedback man - yeah its our first song nd we put it together really quickly so its not the best but yeah we will improve

[JMSN]

Re: Forever Remix

I'll be honest with my feedback to make you a better artist..

Flow: all of you need to work on matching your lines with the beat.
some of your lines are longer than the rest, match your lines up with eachother and it'll flow much better.
Lyrics: need to put more heart into your lyrics, the basic "ball" "fall" "shine" "grind" lyrics dont cut it anymore..they are overused
focus on using multi's and metaphors to get your lyrics across, people will feel you more

hopefully you take this feed and use it, dont get mad, im trying to help ya'll.

[indiglo09]

Re: Forever Remix

Thanks for the feedback man nd not just hatin on it, we all hav 2 work on our lyrics nd delivery but lik we made this real quick nd its our first track so we're def gon improve

[Redd Herring]

Re: Forever Remix

ouuta nowhere with the feedback but aye ya'll had potential but you need someone to edit you shit that wasnt there when you recorded it so we can har what you saying.