@@ YuNg DIEzEL PREzENTs - STARSHIP PREVIEW @@ (MIXTAPE COMMING SOON)

[YUNG DIEZEL]

STARSHIP PREVIEW:

LimeLinx - Preview - YUNG DIEZEL- STARSHIP.mp3

LYRICS:

i need you to be complete like the letters yo,

why go, you hot , on fire, and im a pyro,

maniac,

you prolly tired of hearin me sayin that,

but its the truth, i been sweatin you, every since the day we met

sidenote, i love it when she say she's wet,

then she say he's it, and he is me

and he's a g, sometimes she gets blinds in the eyes,

so i lend her my lens, she can see,

no redlight,

i will never stop, no greenlight, so i will never let her go.

late night im the man, and i like to let the letters show,

on my fitted cap when i tap, like mr. marcus,

on it reads bryan j, so she never for gets,

this is real love , not a play, or a skit,

in the night sky is where a star sits,

and i will never letter go , from my starship


WELCOME TO MY WORLD THE MIXTAPE COMMING SOON.

IM thinkin about doin some 808's and heartbreaks type shit, or some drake shit, perhaps.............


backfeed:

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post294125

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ng-player.html

[mykill]

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Flow: A
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4/5, This was a good track. You've got the flow and lyric quotients of rap wrapped up. Nice to see another consistent rapper here in The Studio.

WELCOME TO MY WORLD THE MIXTAPE COMMING SOON.

IM thinkin about doin some 808's and heartbreaks type shit, or some drake shit, perhaps.............

Hmm...My Advice? Fuck that. Do a mixtape about what you want. Dont attempt to do something like someone else, make it worth while, make it count, and most of all make it a body of work that you feel good about, regardless of what style, characteristics, etc its in. You dont need to bite something else, or try to replicate something someone else did to make something good, and I can't tell you not to. But on the plus side, spending time to replicate something or do something similar often leads to inspiration and sometimes leads to something new and cool. So do your thing. Just remember, make sure that final product is bangin'.

Mykill Out. Come see me and my buddy on Halloween.....

[Pestrator]

Re: @@ YuNg DIEzEL PREzENTs - STARSHIP PREVIEW @@ (MIXTAPE COMMING SOON)

sick ass song bro i like ur flow its nice n good lyrics?
did u produce this beat?

[Fenix]

Re: @@ YuNg DIEzEL PREzENTs - STARSHIP PREVIEW @@ (MIXTAPE COMMING SOON)

damn this was really fuckin sick man!

[MC_Crary]

Re: @@ YuNg DIEzEL PREzENTs - STARSHIP PREVIEW @@ (MIXTAPE COMMING SOON)

You got a good flow man. I like this track, gotta agree with Mykill though. Haven't checked any of your other music, but I've noticed you've been dropping alot of stuff. This song shows that you have your own style, which is what I want hear. Welcome to My World seems like it would be completely created by you, not 808s type shit or drake type.

Flow: Great, you made the rhymes work with the flow.
Lyrics: On point, few multies in there and good metaphors.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: @@ YuNg DIEzEL PREzENTs - STARSHIP PREVIEW @@ (MIXTAPE COMMING SOON)

sick ass song bro i like ur flow its nice n good lyrics?
did u produce this beat?

NAh, my producer made this.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK EVERYONE. more like this on the experimental album probably.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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i finished this one

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: @@ YuNg DIEzEL PREzENTs - STARSHIP PREVIEW @@ (MIXTAPE COMMING SOON)

damn this shit was deep.

i need to get back on my shit.

---------- Post added at 01:21 AM ---------- Previous post was at 01:16 AM ----------

Flow: A
Lyrics: A

You've got the flow and lyric quotients of rap wrapped up. Nice to see another consistent rapper here in The Studio.

real talk

spending time to replicate something or do something similar often leads to inspiration and sometimes leads to something new and cool. So do your thing. Just remember, make sure that final product is bangin'.

real talk right there.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: @@ YuNg DIEzEL PREzENTs - STARSHIP PREVIEW @@ (MIXTAPE COMMING SOON)

Bumping old threads for no reason = lock.