@@ YUNG DIEzeL PREzeNTS - HATE (PREVIEW) @@ [EXCLUSIVE PREVIEW]

[YUNG DIEZEL]

another exclusive preview for mixtape

THIS song samples the song shout, and they sayin "hey" but i tried to be creative wit it , and made it named hate.
ENJOY.
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[Cody]

Re: @@ YUNG DIEzeL PREzeNTS - HATE (PREVIEW) @@ [EXCLUSIVE PREVIEW]

Your feedback is invalid. It is also sad that you don't want to put enough effort into a song to finish it.

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[YUNG DIEZEL]

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It is also sad that you don't want to put enough effort into a song to finish it.

where is this??

the song on the mixtape, this is a preview.

your feedback is invalid. It is also sad that you don't want to put enough effort into a song to finish it.

Feedback

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flow:
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decent singing on hook.

I always loved that beat.

Interesting flow, not bad though.

Just work on making it go smooth, but lyrics was nice.

yo i like what u did here bro, i love those drake type beats .

Nice choice of synths.

Dope drums, something different.

I would rap on this , good shit, keep it up.

wtf are u talmbout cody?? IF THAT ISNT feedback, then u blind.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: @@ YUNG DIEzeL PREzeNTS - HATE (PREVIEW) @@ [EXCLUSIVE PREVIEW]

** double post by mistake. u can delete this post.

[Cody]

Re: @@ YUNG DIEzeL PREzeNTS - HATE (PREVIEW) @@ [EXCLUSIVE PREVIEW]

wtf are u talmbout cody??

WTF you talmbout DIEzel???
There is no constructive criticism in them damn post's.

Telling someone to keep it up isn't criticism.

Just work on making it go smooth

You call that criticism?

Heres a hint of criticism for your raps, quit rapping like your'e reading out of a Dr. Seuss book, stringing together four letter words isn't hot.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: @@ YUNG DIEzeL PREzeNTS - HATE (PREVIEW) @@ [EXCLUSIVE PREVIEW]

Heres a hint of criticism for your raps, quit rapping like your'e reading out of a Dr. Seuss book, stringing together four letter words isn't hot.

thanks for the feedback bro.

whats an example of a line i did this with???

[Cody]

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thanks for the feedback bro.

whats an example of a line i did this with???

See me I'm balling out, they was in my pants now I'm balling out, now tell me what its all about, I stay going in never falling out. <---

My bad it was three letter words with a couple five letter words.

[Flame Gang]

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Yo Yung Diezel, can u put this mixtape on a diff. download link thats not Limewire? I cant download anythin' on limewire 4 sum reason. would really like 2 hear it.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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See me I'm balling out, they was in my pants now I'm balling out, now tell me what its all about, I stay going in never falling out. <---

My bad it was three letter words with a couple five letter words.

hate hate, gon' and shout
i got somethin that'll bring ya women out
imma make it rain, yeah fall a lot,
but u in little somethin that we call a drought
see me, im ballin out, they was in my pants, but now im ballin out
yeah, so tell me what u all about v? I STAY GOIN IN , NEVER FALLIN OUT.
dont u doubt the kid, im about my buisniss, grown man status, and these niggas iz like kids is.
SODA SODA POP IT GIRL, SHE IS ON HER FIZZ SHIT,
ROUND UP IN THE RED , SUMTHNIN LIKE A PACK OF RITZ BITS.

good shit, thanks for the feedback. but damn, every rapper got simple rhymes sometimes. i just wanted to have fun with this. lol
check out my blue verse, it had alotta wordplay. but my flow on that one didnt turn out like i wanted.
since u the only one that give good feedback, whats some feedback about my verse from the song " mr different"???

[Cody]

Re: @@ YUNG DIEzeL PREzeNTS - HATE (PREVIEW) @@ [EXCLUSIVE PREVIEW]

g whats some feedback about my verse from the song " mr different"???

That is a damn good verse. Your flow was on point with the beat and your lyrics were way better on this song.
You should try to change your flows speed up a little bit to make the track seem more interesting..

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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That is a damn good verse. Your flow was on point with the beat and your lyrics were way better on this song.
You should try to change your flows speed up a little bit to make the track seem more interesting..

change the speeds in the "hate song" or the "mr different" ??

[Cody]

Re: @@ YUNG DIEzeL PREzeNTS - HATE (PREVIEW) @@ [EXCLUSIVE PREVIEW]

change the speeds in the "hate song" or the "mr different" ??

Mr. Different, if you would of switched it up mid verse it would of been hella nice.