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    Z!Greatest feat. Muneeb & Mohib Khan - Perfect Girl

    Aight everyone, Ziggy here again with a new song, this time more on the singing side than rapping, hope yall like it. I'm the hook, 1st and 3rd verses, aswell as 2-3 lines in the second verse.

    The features are just a couple mates of mine, I've got a solo version good to go shortly.

    Here's the track itself, Perfect Girl - YouTube - Z!Greatest feat. Muneeb & Mohib Khan- Perfect Girl (prod. Showdown of Rockitpro)

    Here's my feedback-

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/t26050/

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/t25997/
    Ziggy B



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    Re: Z!Greatest feat. Muneeb & Mohib Khan - Perfect Girl

    cant go wrong wit female songs.
    im a fan of autotune, and u used it correctly.
    features worked out good in this song.
    nice hook too. i like the "cool" part , made me think about my song lol.

    its says feat muneeb and mohib??? i only heard one feature though?? and you had 2 verses, so that confused me lol.
    EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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    • #3
      Re: Z!Greatest feat. Muneeb & Mohib Khan - Perfect Girl

      1st time I'm hearin' a song were the autotune is almost perfect used. #Pro

      I like the lyrics too, and @ some points ya sound like Drake, lol.

      But good track bro. Catchy hook too. (Bad feature tho..)

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      • #4
        Re: Z!Greatest feat. Muneeb & Mohib Khan - Perfect Girl

        Originally posted by YUNG DIEZEL View Post
        cant go wrong wit female songs.
        im a fan of autotune, and u used it correctly.
        features worked out good in this song.
        nice hook too. i like the "cool" part , made me think about my song lol.

        its says feat muneeb and mohib??? i only heard one feature though?? and you had 2 verses, so that confused me lol.
        Thanks dawg, appreciate it muchly, autotune is sick when used properly, D.O.A my ass And yeah, Mohib is the start of Verse 2, Muneeb is the guy who starts "No one can describeeee" like 8 bars in to verse 2. I had to do a couple fill-in lines on verse 2 tho lol, like 3 outta the 16.

        Originally posted by ABjerg View Post
        1st time I'm hearin' a song were the autotune is almost perfect used. #Pro

        I like the lyrics too, and @ some points ya sound like Drake, lol.

        But good track bro. Catchy hook too. (Bad feature tho..)
        Thanks man, that was like all positive haha, thanks for the Autotune comment, I appreciate it, bad autotune can ruin a song a.k.a Ron Browz lol
        Ziggy B



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        • #5
          Re: Z!Greatest feat. Muneeb & Mohib Khan - Perfect Girl

          Originally posted by ABjerg View Post
          1st time I'm hearin' a song were the autotune is almost perfect used. #Pro
          peep my autotune songs, im good wit it too.
          EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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            Re: Z!Greatest feat. Muneeb & Mohib Khan - Perfect Girl

            Originally posted by YUNG DIEZEL View Post
            peep my autotune songs, im good wit it too.
            You sound decent with it, sorta Wayne like, truthfully I'm not a fan of that sorta autotune but you sound pretty fresh.
            Ziggy B



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            • #7
              Re: Z!Greatest feat. Muneeb & Mohib Khan - Perfect Girl

              u seem more comfortable on the mic on this song than u did on "better days" and that really helps me as a listener "feel" the song. its a catchy song though. I dont like the second verse though at all, even ur parts. To me it feels like u just wanted to have 3 verses so that got thrown in. The song would be fine with verses 1 and 3. Keep it up i like the rapping/singing versatility.
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              • #8
                Re: Z!Greatest feat. Muneeb & Mohib Khan - Perfect Girl

                Damn bro your flow on this is mad ncie bro, your precense is real good bro, you have the autotune pretty well mastered. Very catchy song, i liek what you did with the hok, the 2nd verse wasnt good though. Keep it up 4/5

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                • #9
                  Re: Z!Greatest feat. Muneeb & Mohib Khan - Perfect Girl

                  Flow: Not sure if the accent suits the autotune tbh. First and third verse and hook are nice but im not too sure about the rest 6/10
                  Lyrics:                   The first and third verses have some nice lines dont like the second verse. The guy doesnt have a good voice. 7/10
                  Other Notes: the beats pretty generic for this type of song. Nothing special but its not too bad either.
                  Overall/Rating: 6.5/10

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                  • #10
                    Re: Z!Greatest feat. Muneeb & Mohib Khan - Perfect Girl

                    Originally posted by Pestrator View Post
                    Damn bro your flow on this is mad ncie bro, your precense is real good bro, you have the autotune pretty well mastered. Very catchy song, i liek what you did with the hok, the 2nd verse wasnt good though. Keep it up 4/5
                    Cheers to everyone saying it's good besides verse 2 lol, I can't complain since that ain't me haha.

                    Pestrator if your ever looking for a hook or w/e hit me up
                    Ziggy B



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