YouTube Allstars Best Rapper Hip Hop Contest Verse

[Glen F Baby]

YouTube - Joey DeJesus ft Glen F AKA Mr. HAM Youtube all stars contest entry

YouTube Allstars Best Rapper Hip Hop Contest Verse

Aren't you tired of this damn repetition,
Rappers talking bout cash and pussy-licking,
Life's a bitch but I don't wanna fuck it up,
I'd rather make the most out of her and love her up

In the timeline of rap, there's a huge gap,
Between the old and new eras, where the heroes at?
Now most everything on radio is phat beats,
Fake rapping, what's happening to the rap biz

I don't get it, it's like we all de-humanized,
No love for good guys only rich guys,
Guess it's OK to say that love is blind,
And that love is deaf, cuz it can't hear the cries

Nice deeds give low prizes, lil dinero,
I call that "keeping it on the d-low",
Real rappers losing green, where's Cee-lo?
Fake rappers making green, where's American Eagle?

[THA GR8 M8]

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