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[Sentus]

I've been gone for awhile and missed a lot of stuff so anyone that wants me to give them feed post it in here. I'm going to give legit feed though so if you can't take criticism then don't even bother

[Z!Greatest]

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Welcome back bro

I've dropped 3 new tracks since you've been gone with a 4th in the pipeline, I understand if you can't be bothered checking them all but if you did thatd be dope. Here they are-

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...for-remix.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...fect-girl.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ing-track.html

[THA GR8 M8]

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Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack) | THP

[mykill]

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so where ya been? Spring training for football?

[pgathriller]

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would be dope to get some honest feed on this one:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post454498

[SpazKS]

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http://youtu.be/xs9qSRXeavg
http://youtu.be/0QTHrh20eSA

[Sentus]

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Nah I've been really busy with baseball, I have like 5-6 games a week lol

Plus I got away with rapping for awhile, but I'm starting to get back

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Fantastic Stuff (Prod. By Adamack) | THP

I was really feeling that song, Adamack did a pretty good job with the beat and you did a good job creating a melody over it with your flow. Lyrics were good, you had some pretty good rhymes and I was feeling what you were saying. Delivery was different and it caught my attention, it didn't sound like the same blah blah blah as most people I listen to. Only problem I really saw was the flow. I understand what you were going for with all the pauses and ish like that but it could have been executed better.

But don't ever try steppin' to me with that amaetur skill

This line for example, the pause was unneeded, expecially at the end of a rhyme scheme and a bar you should have just kept the flow going through the whole time to finish it strong.

We all have bad ones, thats how it goes, they should stay

This line aswell. There were lines where it worked though and sounded good like in

These days, all these rappers ain't spittin' nothing but that bogus shit
Now go and quote me bitch

You just have to find out for yourself what's best though, this is just my opinion.



I think it's time you get some new quality bro, you're elevating your game rapping wise and that would be the next step.

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http://youtu.be/xs9qSRXeavg
http://youtu.be/0QTHrh20eSA

For: Spaz K.S.-Go Ahead prod by(illProduction)

Beat was fucking epic, it was getting me pumped in the begining, props to illProduction

Whatever you did with the style...don't ever do it again. It sounded horrible, way too much reverb or something, I don't even know. Just let your natural voice do the rapping. I don't really have anything other than that cause that would change everything.

Same thing for the other song.

[THA GR8 M8]

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I was really feeling that song, Adamack did a pretty good job with the beat and you did a good job creating a melody over it with your flow. Lyrics were good, you had some pretty good rhymes and I was feeling what you were saying. Delivery was different and it caught my attention, it didn't sound like the same blah blah blah as most people I listen to. Only problem I really saw was the flow. I understand what you were going for with all the pauses and ish like that but it could have been executed better.

But don't ever try steppin' to me with that amaetur skill

This line for example, the pause was unneeded, expecially at the end of a rhyme scheme and a bar you should have just kept the flow going through the whole time to finish it strong.

We all have bad ones, thats how it goes, they should stay

This line aswell. There were lines where it worked though and sounded good like in

These days, all these rappers ain't spittin' nothing but that bogus shit
Now go and quote me bitch

You just have to find out for yourself what's best though, this is just my opinion.



I think it's time you get some new quality bro, you're elevating your game rapping wise and that would be the next step.

Thanks man! The reason I had the pauses in there was 'cause I go for more of the laid back flow, and I think have short lines like I did in this song it works. But I do get what you're saying about the pauses, I just really didn't think people mind them.. you know. But I'll try to stop/do them less. And my quality is good man, I didn't really master this track too much. But I listen to it through my studio headphones and it sounds as good as some CDQ songs I have. Obviously they have better effects and their vocals stick out more, but my quality doesn't sound bad. But thanks again for the feedback. Good to see you around here again, where has Coleon been?

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html
leh go sentus

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html

[Pestrator]

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Hey bro could you leave me some fb to these beats, ty
MP3 Player SoundClick
http://www.soundclick.com/player/sin...&q=hi&newref=1

[mykill]

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word. i saw on trshady how you said you was outta rap for a bit. figured it was sports that had you on lock again. so baseball and football huh? when you even get FREE TIME during the year? lol

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...imensions.html

you've always been pretty fair with your feedback. I know i need work, at least, I know this isnt 100%. But give it a spin and give me some good thoughts about it. Got big plans for the next one, and I want to make something really proper for chaps 'round here.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

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I want to make something really proper for chaps 'round here.

who?