2 Songs I have made... Need feedback... Also looking for collabs....

[Shady Frizzy]

I have only been making music for about 6 months now and here are 2 of the latest songs I've made...

Murder She Wrote:
Hulkshare.com Murder She Wrote.mp3

The Intro (Judge Me):
Hulkshare.com The Intro (Judge Me) MP3.mp3

Just lookin for some feedback

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: 2 Songs I have made... Need feedback... Also looking for collabs....

hmmmmm.........Heavy eminem influence. even ya name.

good nonetheless.

do u have an account on shady forum???

[Shady Frizzy]

Re: 2 Songs I have made... Need feedback... Also looking for collabs....

which forum?

---------- Post added at 06:54 AM ---------- Previous post was at 06:52 AM ----------

I do have 1 at StudioLeaks ... DFrizzy44

[Tha Professor]

Re: 2 Songs I have made... Need feedback... Also looking for collabs....

A lot of shadyness in yo flow, with a hint of something else...
To be honest i like u, no homo.

would b tight if you'd stay active 'round these parts

[Sentus]

Re: 2 Songs I have made... Need feedback... Also looking for collabs....

The thing I was most impressed with was how clear your delivery was. I could clearly hear every word. I didn't like your flow though, there were no slips in I just felt like it was to slow for this beat. Wait, now it's fast. This flow's faster but there are slips in it haha, guess everything can't be perfect. Chorus is pretty nice. Lyrics were pretty average, it looks like this is deffinitely Eminem influenced but it's not technically as good as he is.

I only fed Murder She Wrote

[Shady Frizzy]

Re: 2 Songs I have made... Need feedback... Also looking for collabs....

Thanks for the feedback guys... I'm workin on an album... and murder she wrote was just a song that i wanted to try somethin different on... it was fun to do tho