She Will (Remix by Me)

[Shady Frizzy]

I love this beat/song so much I had to make a remix of it...

It contains 1 verse and a hook... Just tryin' to get some feedback to see if I should keep on going with the song...

Let me know what u all think... Enjoy

Hulkshare.com She Will (MP3).mp3

[Vocker]

Re: She Will (Remix by Me)

!! That's fucking amazing dude! Love the fucking flow

Complete the song. Don't leave a nigga hanging...

[Shady Frizzy]

Re: She Will (Remix by Me)

Thanks for the Feedback... keep it comin guys...

[ScHeEzZ]

Re: She Will (Remix by Me)

I love this beat/song so much I had to make a remix of it...

It contains 1 verse and a hook... Just tryin' to get some feedback to see if I should keep on going with the song...

Let me know what u all think... Enjoy

Hulkshare.com She Will (MP3).mp3

in the beginning your flow was strong, it sounded confident, however toward the end it got a bit stiff, sounding like you were ready to wrap it up. a couple of parts got me thinking you were about go go "chopper"-like, but didn't, but makes me want to hear some more of your stuff to see how fast you can spit. a couple of the punchlines were slightly reaching, but nothing too bad. so overall i think it was a pretty good verse, and i actually wish it was a bit longer.

i wasn't a big fan of the chorus, as it wasn't too different than run of the mill hooks, and i'm not too keen on singing rappers in the first place.

good job man, keep it coming, maybe tighten up a few things here and there, make a verse longer and a second verse, and it'll sound a lot better.what kind of mic are you using it's quite muffled, like mine, hahaa.

[Shady Frizzy]

Re: She Will (Remix by Me)

Thanks for the good feedback... I actually added a Amp Sim when mixing my vocals so it gives it a diff sound... My mic is a BLUE Snowball w/ pop filter....