Kage Ft Akkucc- Its Good

[TupacShaquer]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W-7fjcErM6A

Akkucc Lyrics (2nd verse)
yeah so i am going up,and all others going down,
so all of you please get ready cause ashu man is in the town,
i am not white or black, i am an indian so little brown,
and i don't like my girl in skirt i like her in the gown,
yeah so i am going up and i am going fast,
and people are saying to please slow down,
but i am saying no cause i want that crown,
and i am working hard whether its dusk or dawn,
cause i want to be in building not just in the lounge,
and i am not hard i am just like the spaunge,
and i am not a guy who make the check bounce,
yeah so i am not like a rapper who can't do dance,
and i always do better i never give you any chance,
and i am just like the VIP cause i never need any pass,
and i always say truth i never wore any mask,
yeah so don't wear mask and don't need pass,
and always pay the bills including tax,
and i am very horny so always want the sex,
so i bang the girls on table,desk,
and i don't pick fine i go for best,
and take her home and leave the rest,
but before the fuck i always do the test,

and if anything wrong i leave the date,yeahh



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[Z!Greatest]

Re: Kage Ft Akkucc- Its Good

Bloody awful, straight up lol. Kage mate you barely stayed on the beat, and as a rapper I don't understand how anyone can go OFF the beat. Like do you not listen back and think, shit my words don't go with the rhythm? Lyrically it was alright, but generic. Quality sounded like you recorded it with a potato.

Akkucc, seems like your the go-to guy right now, though why exactly I can't quite fathom. Reptitive flow that went off any time you tried to switch it, lyrics well...I know the whole grammar boundary blah blah blah but if a baby was to make noises on a beat I wouldn't say "Ah well he's trying, so it's good music". I admire your work rate and hustle, as I've said before, but if your rapping is wack I'll be straight up about it.

And just while I'm in Simon Cowell mode, and I know this is no fault of your own, but I simply can't take anything you do seriously with that accent. It's not the accent so much as the fact it's coupled with the bad grammar and lyrics filled with Americanisms and Wayne style swag, but it just sounds ridiculous lol.


Feel like a bastard for this post but whatever, trying to quit smoking brings it out of me lol.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Kage Ft Akkucc- Its Good

Why do you think you deserve feedback? I just looked at your "feedback" links and that is no where near feedback. This thread is looking like it needs a lock since you can't follow the feedback rules.

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