Feedback on this phobia video I created

[Danny M]

Alright guys,

I've just finished a rough version of this video I had to create for my Uni project (deadline is in 4 days )

I got given this phobia, and then I had to create a video about it.

The phobia I was given is called "Illyngophobia", which is basically the fear of getting vertigo or becoming dizzy when looking down from heights.

Anyways, you can the check out the 1 minute video below:

So do any of you have any feedback for me? Did you like it, was it shit, how would you improve it?

I was also thinking about making the "Graphics" forum in to a whole "Design" forum, but I still think it will be used for graphics. But that's not important right now.

Thanks

[Cli-City]

Re: Feedback on this phobia video I created

Pretty dope....but I must admit..if I didn't read your little description I would think this was for Acrophobia...

[Aza]

Re: Feedback on this phobia video I created

Danny, i dont know exactly what you gotta do...is the main focus on the way it is edited, the way it tells the fear? or the video itself?

BBM me also, got a few things to say.

[Danny M]

Re: Feedback on this phobia video I created

Pretty dope....but I must admit..if I didn't read your little description I would think this was for Acrophobia...

Ahh, well the phobia is kind of similar to that one.

This is why I included the record player spinning around, so that represents the Vertigo part.

[RiCH HOMiE QUiL]

Re: Feedback on this phobia video I created

Video is good. But I would definitely change the font.

[Danny M]

Re: Feedback on this phobia video I created

Video is good. But I would definitely change the font.

What don't you like about it Is it hard to read, look childish etc

I chose that font because it's famous for being the same font used in the film Vertigo, and my phobia includes vertigo.

[RiCH HOMiE QUiL]

Re: Feedback on this phobia video I created

What don't you like about it Is it hard to read, look childish etc

I chose that font because it's famous for being the same font used in the film Vertigo, and my phobia includes vertigo.

Nah it does actually look good, but yeah, in my opinion it's pretty hard to read, especially on that background. maybe it's possible to highlight it somehow so there is a little more contrast and you'd be good to go

[WeezyFan]

Re: Feedback on this phobia video I created

Its dope! good work b'le dat

[Danny M]

Re: Feedback on this phobia video I created

Nah it does actually look good, but yeah, in my opinion it's pretty hard to read, especially on that background. maybe it's possible to highlight it somehow so there is a little more contrast and you'd be good to go

Okay thanks for that, I'll see what I can do.

[THEREALDJBMURDER]

Re: Feedback on this phobia video I created

vid is on point like a harpoon

[AikawaX]

Re: Feedback on this phobia video I created

Good vid tbh, the record spinning around was a good idea.

[Mars Martian]

Re: Feedback on this phobia video I created

I was able to read it, some cats on here dropped out of school!!... nice job