Weezy LP (Large Piece)

[YankeeBaseball]

http://i44.tinypic.com/xp3nu1.png

[Def Kool]

Re: Weezy LP (Large Piece)

I Like It.. But There's Something Weird

[-Nino-]

Re: Weezy LP (Large Piece)

Hmm im not feelin this piece the wayne pictures that go in a circle with different effects doesnt flow at all...the little dude by the text is random and the light source is odd..

[Hero_Kid]

Re: Weezy LP (Large Piece)

http://i44.tinypic.com/xp3nu1.png

Wow problems problems..

You have four weezy images all with a different filter each. Baaad sign bro, no focal at all
You have parts blurred like his mic and parts sharpend like him. If you gonna sharpen him, sharpen everythin thats in the original image.

If your gonna have a lightsource make sure it comes from ONE place only.
Get rid of all the other weezy images and add in some more brushes and stuff it will look better.

And when you use stocks/c4ds make sure the edges dont show. Get a soft eraser and brush off the lines.
Use better space stocks. Deviantart not google.

And why is there a random thing slap bang in the middle?

[Jamerson]

Re: Weezy LP (Large Piece)

not diggin it at all but it looks like you put work into it so good job anyways

[YankeeBaseball]

Re: Weezy LP (Large Piece)

http://i44.tinypic.com/xp3nu1.png

Wow problems problems..

You have four weezy images all with a different filter each. Baaad sign bro, no focal at all
You have parts blurred like his mic and parts sharpend like him. If you gonna sharpen him, sharpen everythin thats in the original image.

If your gonna have a lightsource make sure it comes from ONE place only.
Get rid of all the other weezy images and add in some more brushes and stuff it will look better.

And when you use stocks/c4ds make sure the edges dont show. Get a soft eraser and brush off the lines.
Use better space stocks. Deviantart not google.

And why is there a random thing slap bang in the middle?

1. The focal is the biggest one of him, obviously. I did the filters to make it more of a focal. If I would have sharpened everything then there would have been a couple renders which wouldn't look good.

2. The space stocks are not from google.

3. The thing in the middle was for creativeness, how many times do you see that done.

Thanks for the input, this was made almost a year ago with a year layoff haha. Just posted it to see what ya'll would say.

[Hero_Kid]

Re: Weezy LP (Large Piece)

http://i44.tinypic.com/xp3nu1.png

Wow problems problems..

You have four weezy images all with a different filter each. Baaad sign bro, no focal at all
You have parts blurred like his mic and parts sharpend like him. If you gonna sharpen him, sharpen everythin thats in the original image.

If your gonna have a lightsource make sure it comes from ONE place only.
Get rid of all the other weezy images and add in some more brushes and stuff it will look better.

And when you use stocks/c4ds make sure the edges dont show. Get a soft eraser and brush off the lines.
Use better space stocks. Deviantart not google.

And why is there a random thing slap bang in the middle?

1. The focal is the biggest one of him, obviously. I did the filters to make it more of a focal. If I would have sharpened everything then there would have been a couple renders which wouldn't look good.

2. The space stocks are not from google.

3. The thing in the middle was for creativeness, how many times do you see that done.

Thanks for the input, this was made almost a year ago with a year layoff haha. Just posted it to see what ya'll would say.

Well your focal is very distracted. It may be seen but its not clear when the lights so bright. Focal doesnt necessarily mean it needs to be big, small focals are fine.

Ma bad, it just looks like a bad stock so i thought it was from google

Lmao that may be "creative" but it really doesnt fit in at all with the pieces composition.

[vorthaxX]

Re: Weezy LP (Large Piece)

i like.

[YankeeBaseball]

Re: Weezy LP (Large Piece)

[quote=Hero_Kid]

http://i44.tinypic.com/xp3nu1.png

Wow problems problems..

You have four weezy images all with a different filter each. Baaad sign bro, no focal at all
You have parts blurred like his mic and parts sharpend like him. If you gonna sharpen him, sharpen everythin thats in the original image.

If your gonna have a lightsource make sure it comes from ONE place only.
Get rid of all the other weezy images and add in some more brushes and stuff it will look better.

And when you use stocks/c4ds make sure the edges dont show. Get a soft eraser and brush off the lines.
Use better space stocks. Deviantart not google.

And why is there a random thing slap bang in the middle?

1. The focal is the biggest one of him, obviously. I did the filters to make it more of a focal. If I would have sharpened everything then there would have been a couple renders which wouldn't look good.

2. The space stocks are not from google.

3. The thing in the middle was for creativeness, how many times do you see that done.

Thanks for the input, this was made almost a year ago with a year layoff haha. Just posted it to see what ya'll would say.

Well your focal is very distracted. It may be seen but its not clear when the lights so bright. Focal doesnt necessarily mean it needs to be big, small focals are fine.

Ma bad, it just looks like a bad stock so i thought it was from google

Lmao that may be "creative" but it really doesnt fit in at all with the pieces composition.[/quote:2p1xc75p]

The focal is clear lol.

What stock?

[Hero_Kid]

Re: Weezy LP (Large Piece)

[quote=yankees8890]

http://i44.tinypic.com/xp3nu1.png

Wow problems problems..

You have four weezy images all with a different filter each. Baaad sign bro, no focal at all
You have parts blurred like his mic and parts sharpend like him. If you gonna sharpen him, sharpen everythin thats in the original image.

If your gonna have a lightsource make sure it comes from ONE place only.
Get rid of all the other weezy images and add in some more brushes and stuff it will look better.

And when you use stocks/c4ds make sure the edges dont show. Get a soft eraser and brush off the lines.
Use better space stocks. Deviantart not google.

And why is there a random thing slap bang in the middle?

1. The focal is the biggest one of him, obviously. I did the filters to make it more of a focal. If I would have sharpened everything then there would have been a couple renders which wouldn't look good.

2. The space stocks are not from google.

3. The thing in the middle was for creativeness, how many times do you see that done.

Thanks for the input, this was made almost a year ago with a year layoff haha. Just posted it to see what ya'll would say.

Well your focal is very distracted. It may be seen but its not clear when the lights so bright. Focal doesnt necessarily mean it needs to be big, small focals are fine.

Ma bad, it just looks like a bad stock so i thought it was from google

Lmao that may be "creative" but it really doesnt fit in at all with the pieces composition.

The focal is clear lol.

What stock?[/quote:fw0srwbe]

Dude, did you save a psd got i want you to improve it but if its old then just leave it

[YankeeBaseball]

Re: Weezy LP (Large Piece)

[quote=Hero_Kid][quote=yankees8890]

http://i44.tinypic.com/xp3nu1.png

Wow problems problems..

You have four weezy images all with a different filter each. Baaad sign bro, no focal at all
You have parts blurred like his mic and parts sharpend like him. If you gonna sharpen him, sharpen everythin thats in the original image.

If your gonna have a lightsource make sure it comes from ONE place only.
Get rid of all the other weezy images and add in some more brushes and stuff it will look better.

And when you use stocks/c4ds make sure the edges dont show. Get a soft eraser and brush off the lines.
Use better space stocks. Deviantart not google.

And why is there a random thing slap bang in the middle?

1. The focal is the biggest one of him, obviously. I did the filters to make it more of a focal. If I would have sharpened everything then there would have been a couple renders which wouldn't look good.

2. The space stocks are not from google.

3. The thing in the middle was for creativeness, how many times do you see that done.

Thanks for the input, this was made almost a year ago with a year layoff haha. Just posted it to see what ya'll would say.

Well your focal is very distracted. It may be seen but its not clear when the lights so bright. Focal doesnt necessarily mean it needs to be big, small focals are fine.

Ma bad, it just looks like a bad stock so i thought it was from google

Lmao that may be "creative" but it really doesnt fit in at all with the pieces composition.

The focal is clear lol.

What stock?[/quote:36lsmfdc]

Dude, did you save a psd got i want you to improve it but if its old then just leave it [/quote:36lsmfdc]

I don't have the .psd it's from a year ago. And improve... lol I'm def better than you if I ever decided to seriously get back into this

[YSBreezy]

Re: Weezy LP (Large Piece)

i like it