Second Attempt

[Jamerson]

My second attempt @ the TML cover
what do yall think ?






ps. for the experts, not only critique the bad stuff give some feedback on stuff that was on point thanks

[lovalle]

Re: Second Attempt

i dont really see a difference besides the text, which needs a new font. & you should put drake in there too.

[Jamerson]

Re: Second Attempt

i dont really see a difference besides the text, which needs a new font. & you should put drake in there too.

the lighting, the shirt, the depth

[Franknstein]

Re: Second Attempt

My second attempt @ the TML cover
what do yall think ?






ps. for the experts, not only critique the bad stuff give some feedback on stuff that was on point thanks

im sorry this may make me look like a dumbass but wheres the me in thank me later

[Def Kool]

Re: Second Attempt

You Should Look At Other CD Cover NOt Only From Hip-Hop Music Since Thay All Look Alike Look At Experimental Covers To Give You The Inspiration Needed

[Jamerson]

Re: Second Attempt

My second attempt @ the TML cover
what do yall think ?






ps. for the experts, not only critique the bad stuff give some feedback on stuff that was on point thanks

im sorry this may make me look like a dumbass but wheres the me in thank me later

its supposed to be drake as inn me so its Thanks (drake picture) Later

You Should Look At Other CD Cover NOt Only From Hip-Hop Music Since Thay All Look Alike Look At Experimental Covers To Give You The Inspiration Needed

and yeah ive been looking at some

[-Nino-]

Re: Second Attempt

Keep the first one just add better text and Thank Me later.

[Jamerson]

Re: Second Attempt

Keep the first one just add better text and Thank Me later.

the first one of the two up there? thats the original picture lmao ..
or you mean the first one i posted with the arrows?

[Hero_Kid]

Re: Second Attempt

Well the lights coming from behind him so i dont see why his left side is dark..

[Jamerson]

Re: Second Attempt

Well the lights coming from behind him so i dont see why his left side is dark..

yeah i thought that too
but then i saw the shadows on his shirt

[Hero_Kid]

Re: Second Attempt

Well the lights coming from behind him so i dont see why his left side is dark..

yeah i thought that too
but then i saw the shadows on his shirt

Hmm try burning the back and dodge it to make your own light source.

[Franknstein]

Re: Second Attempt

My second attempt @ the TML cover
what do yall think ?






ps. for the experts, not only critique the bad stuff give some feedback on stuff that was on point thanks

im sorry this may make me look like a dumbass but wheres the me in thank me later

its supposed to be drake as inn me so its Thanks (drake picture) Later

You Should Look At Other CD Cover NOt Only From Hip-Hop Music Since Thay All Look Alike Look At Experimental Covers To Give You The Inspiration Needed

and yeah ive been looking at some

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH my bad