Re: My Designs..
Some good stuff, I love the first one especially. Has an excellent subtle blend of the blue and black. Gives an awesome contrast against the main render. Some bits could do with sharpening up a bit to enhance the whole look and feel of it.
The rest, as someone above me has already stated, you need to create a much better focal point to the pictures. Your eyes seem to wonder to try and find what you're trying to portray, so you need to give your audience's eyes something to look at straight away at first glance and think "oh, a piece on Rihanna" or something like that. A little tip I've taught other people over the years is to slightly, ever so slightly blend the background so that the foreground has a little bit more sharpness, making it stand up off the canvas so to speak.
Good stuff though man, just work on the focal point and you've nailed it.
Some good stuff, I love the first one especially. Has an excellent subtle blend of the blue and black. Gives an awesome contrast against the main render. Some bits could do with sharpening up a bit to enhance the whole look and feel of it.
The rest, as someone above me has already stated, you need to create a much better focal point to the pictures. Your eyes seem to wonder to try and find what you're trying to portray, so you need to give your audience's eyes something to look at straight away at first glance and think "oh, a piece on Rihanna" or something like that. A little tip I've taught other people over the years is to slightly, ever so slightly blend the background so that the foreground has a little bit more sharpness, making it stand up off the canvas so to speak.
Good stuff though man, just work on the focal point and you've nailed it.
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