City Overlook

[Waq1]

I see people doing things like this but its my first try at this so tell me what you think!

Thanks



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[Goobz]

Re: City Overlook

Using as Background

[dieboltdesigns]

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It's aight man......I think it needs a smoother transition from the red to blue

[Waq1]

Re: City Overlook

It's aight man......I think it needs a smoother transition from the red to blue

Yeah i see what you mean! Thanks for feedback.

Using as Background

Thanks

[dieboltdesigns]

Re: City Overlook

One other thing, I also dont like the big white cloud on the left.My eyes are really drawn to that first and not the other stuff on the page.

[Waq1]

Re: City Overlook

One other thing, I also dont like the big white cloud on the left.My eyes are really drawn to that first and not the other stuff on the page.

Kewl, i might do another one and spend a little more time on it!

[Pestrator]

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I really liek its, its really unique, it could use some smoothing out, but its a good piece

[Tuneche]

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i think its cool

[SBM832]

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All of the elements need to be blended together better

[Kuzz]

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Nice work man, see what ya trying to do. Just as others have already said things should be blended better and you would have yourself a nice bit of work there!

[Waq1]

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All of the elements need to be blended together better

Nice work man, see what ya trying to do. Just as others have already said things should be blended better and you would have yourself a nice bit of work there!

Yeah i see what you mean the cloud on the left looks completely diff to the one on the right and they dont fit. Ill do another one and take my time on it.

Thanks for the feedback.