The Game - The City ft Kendrick Lamar Cover

[OllyCarterz]

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feedback ?

[Woocky]

Re: The Game - The City ft Kendrick Lamar Cover

"The City" text is too wide. It doesn't have to be as wide as the other text imo.
Maybe, just maybe, you can put a black border around it? Dunno how it looks, but it might look better. You can check.

And maybe you could leave some space between the text. Cuz "feat. Kendrick Lamar" is lying over the "Game" text.

That's all I got. Text is the only thing and I know it's hard as fuck.
Keep it up mate!

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: The Game - The City ft Kendrick Lamar Cover

i like where you put Kendrick.

cause he completely annihilated Game in this track and so he should be up in the clouds on top of everything.

its dope though. no issues besides what Woocky said. the "feat. Kendrick Lamar" text seems to be sitting right on top of the Game logo.

[OllyCarterz]

Re: The Game - The City ft Kendrick Lamar Cover

"The City" text is too wide. It doesn't have to be as wide as the other text imo.
Maybe, just maybe, you can put a black border around it? Dunno how it looks, but it might look better. You can check.

And maybe you could leave some space between the text. Cuz "feat. Kendrick Lamar" is lying over the "Game" text.

That's all I got. Text is the only thing and I know it's hard as fuck.
Keep it up mate!

Wow you fucking right abou the kendrick thing.. didnt saw that brooh, and i will post 1 in a sex with a border !

i like where you put Kendrick.

cause he completely annihilated Game in this track and so he should be up in the clouds on top of everything.

its dope though. no issues besides what Woocky said. the "feat. Kendrick Lamar" text seems to be sitting right on top of the Game logo.

hehe, but kendrick didnt put emotion in it, The Game said what was in his heart

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: The Game - The City ft Kendrick Lamar Cover

hehe, but kendrick didnt put emotion in it, The Game said what was in his heart

notsureifserious...

[Woocky]

Re: The Game - The City ft Kendrick Lamar Cover

Wow you fucking right abou the kendrick thing.. didnt saw that brooh, and i will post 1 in a sex with a border !


hehe, but kendrick didnt put emotion in it, The Game said what was in his heart

I'll give you one sex.

And Kendrick didn't put any emotion in it?

[Mr. Swag]

Re: The Game - The City ft Kendrick Lamar Cover

Kendrick killed this shit 100%. Even the Acapella at the end was... simply amazing.

You know my opionion on the cover, bro.

[OllyCarterz]

Re: The Game - The City ft Kendrick Lamar Cover

I'll give you one sex.

And Kendrick didn't put any emotion in it?

lol



i didnt meant to type that tbh.. i wanted to type as much as Game,

[bushido95]

Re: The Game - The City ft Kendrick Lamar Cover

dööööööpe.


'nuff said.

[OllyCarterz]

Re: The Game - The City ft Kendrick Lamar Cover

dööööööpe.


'nuff said.

Thaaankss brooo !

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: The Game - The City ft Kendrick Lamar Cover

lol



i didnt meant to type that tbh.. i wanted to type as much as Game,

nah b. he did more than Game.

all Game did was name drop.

[OllyCarterz]

Re: The Game - The City ft Kendrick Lamar Cover

nah b. he did more than Game.

all Game did was name drop.

idk bro, im just feelin like he did more with his feelings, totally no hate against lamar, but idk ...