Feedback on a school project

[WeEeEeEzZzZyYy]

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heres a link maybe thatll work

Thanks for the feedback guys!

Here is another one for Pride.



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fire

[back on my bullish*t]

the second one > the first one
you got 5 more of them too??

[JAYRMe]

the second one > the first one
you got 5 more of them too??

Yeah I have to make the other 5 though. These are just rough drafts the project isnt due until the end of the month, I just need 2 for class on tuesday.

I'm going to do

He Got Game 13's for Gluttony
Fire Red 5's for Lust
Toro 7's for Wrath
BC 3's for Sloth
Stingray 10's for Greed

[JAYRMe]

Teacher said I had to make some changes so here is the lastest version of the first one

[Waynasite]

Amazing ^^

[JAYRMe]

Pride

[Lil wayne prezident]

Pride

this is dope as fuck homey.

[lilwayne-carter]

Pride

10 out of 10 for real

[JAYRMe]

So glad ya'll fkn with these!

Latest one: Sloth

[Ares]

[MENTION=49359]JAYRMe[/MENTION] dope concept, but maybe instead of using red for most of them, incorporate the color that represents each sin;
envy=green, pride=violet, wrath=red, sloth=light blue, lust=blue, greed=yellow, gluttony=orange.

and I was gonna say you should use actual bible verses for the words instead of the actual word, but I see you already did that lol

[JAYRMe]

@JAYRMe dope concept, but maybe instead of using red for most of them, incorporate the color that represents each sin;
envy=green, pride=violet, wrath=red, sloth=light blue, lust=blue, greed=yellow, gluttony=orange.

and I was gonna say you should use actual bible verses for the words instead of the actual word, but I see you already did that lol

On my versions that's exactly what I did actually lol talking about the colors that is. I'll post a collage of all of the final ones soon.

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[YMCMB LWHQ]

looks great, good work