Wayne needs a storytelling song

[mirage42]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

lala( not the one with busta rhymes) is definitely a storytelling track even though it's his life story it's still a story telling song.

though none of these songs come even a little close when comparing to em's song "stan" wayne does have scenario story telling tracks such as lisa marie, something you forgot. other songs you could maybe include - paradice, hot revolver all of these have a set scenario and waynes describes the event taking place throughout the song thus telling a story.

for ex: on hot revolver the song starts out "do you have the time to listen to me whine/she askin who's on the other you diss me everytime/ i tell her baby ima star shyt ima above a star/ now i done got so high i forgotten who you are/

he then goes on about how has to leave for some show i assume and tells the girl he'll be there next so call wherever you work at and use your off days for that week, then chours comes in which he states is his conscious telling that he has a problem.

in the second verse he goes on talking about the crazy things his girl does to get him to stay when tells her he has to leave .....etc you get the point

I JUST CAME UP WITH A SUMMARY FOR HOT REVOLVER. YOU KNOW WHAT YOU NEED TO CREATE A SUMMARY RIGHT, YEP YOU GUESSED IT
A FUKKIN STORY -__-

[Waq1]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

Misunderstood.

[kryspy]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

His verse in Love Affair is telling a story

[nkflier23]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

lala( not the one with busta rhymes) is definitely a storytelling track even though it's his life story it's still a story telling song.

though none of these songs come even a little close when comparing to em's song "stan" wayne does have scenario story telling tracks such as lisa marie, something you forgot. other songs you could maybe include - paradice, hot revolver all of these have a set scenario and waynes describes the event taking place throughout the song thus telling a story.

for ex: on hot revolver the song starts out "do you have the time to listen to me whine/she askin who's on the other you diss me everytime/ i tell her baby ima star shyt ima above a star/ now i done got so high i forgotten who you are/

he then goes on about how has to leave for some show i assume and tells the girl he'll be there next so call wherever you work at and use your off days for that week, then chours comes in which he states is his conscious telling that he has a problem.

in the second verse he goes on talking about the crazy things his girl does to get him to stay when tells her he has to leave .....etc you get the point

I JUST CAME UP WITH A SUMMARY FOR HOT REVOLVER. YOU KNOW WHAT YOU NEED TO CREATE A SUMMARY RIGHT, YEP YOU GUESSED IT
A FUKKIN STORY -__-

nigga look and read these lyrics

"Young mullah, baby
Umm, young mullah, baby

She says, do you have the time
To listen to me whine
She askin' who's on the other line?
You diss me every time

I tell 'em, baby I'm a star
Shit, I'm above a star
And now I done got so high
I did forgotten who you are
(Are, are)

Oh oh oh, ah, oh oh eh eh
Ah ah
Oh oh oh, ah, oh oh eh eh
Oh oh oh, ah, oh oh eh eh
Ah ah

I'm in love with you
But I can't be with you
Tomorrow I'll be back
Up on the first flight
Right up out of town

Young mullah, baby

Hop back in my spaceship
Girl, I gotta drop your ass off
(Oh oh eh eh)

Last night, yeah we were spaced girl
You love it, girl, I gotta take off
(Oh oh eh eh)
'Cause Imma be here next week
So call your company and take off
Oh oh oh, yeah oh oh eh

'Cause she say, "Wayne, Wayne"
So she got me all impatient
Cry me a river
I can hear my conscious
While I say aloud

Boy, you got a problem
[ From: HOT REVOLVER Lyrics - LIL' WAYNE ]
(Problem)
And you ain't foolin' no one
But yourself

You're like a hot revolver
(Hot revolver)
But you ain't killin' no one
But yourself

And so she's gone to party town
On her own
And you go by yourself
So all alone

I told her, I can be with her
But I can't be with her
As much as she like me to
She like me too much
That's the problem

Oh my God, then Shorty be whillin'
And when I say I got to leave
You wouldn't believe
All of the things that she'll do
And all of the things
That she'll say to make me stay
And I be like, 'Damn'

I'll be back someday
But she wanna go with me
To outer space
So we made love in the Milky Way
And then I send her on her way

Boy, you got a problem
(Problem)
And you ain't foolin' no one
But yourself

You're like a hot revolver
But you ain't killin' no one
But yourself

And so she's gone to party town
On her own
And you go by yourself
So all alone"


This is not a fkin storytelling song, all he's doing it talkin to and about the girl

[Mr Xclusive]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

nigga look and read these lyrics

"Young mullah, baby
Umm, young mullah, baby

She says, do you have the time
To listen to me whine
She askin' who's on the other line?
You diss me every time

I tell 'em, baby I'm a star
Shit, I'm above a star
And now I done got so high
I did forgotten who you are
(Are, are)

Oh oh oh, ah, oh oh eh eh
Ah ah
Oh oh oh, ah, oh oh eh eh
Oh oh oh, ah, oh oh eh eh
Ah ah

I'm in love with you
But I can't be with you
Tomorrow I'll be back
Up on the first flight
Right up out of town

Young mullah, baby

Hop back in my spaceship
Girl, I gotta drop your ass off
(Oh oh eh eh)

Last night, yeah we were spaced girl
You love it, girl, I gotta take off
(Oh oh eh eh)
'Cause Imma be here next week
So call your company and take off
Oh oh oh, yeah oh oh eh

'Cause she say, "Wayne, Wayne"
So she got me all impatient
Cry me a river
I can hear my conscious
While I say aloud

Boy, you got a problem
[ From: HOT REVOLVER Lyrics - LIL' WAYNE ]
(Problem)
And you ain't foolin' no one
But yourself

You're like a hot revolver
(Hot revolver)
But you ain't killin' no one
But yourself

And so she's gone to party town
On her own
And you go by yourself
So all alone

I told her, I can be with her
But I can't be with her
As much as she like me to
She like me too much
That's the problem

Oh my God, then Shorty be whillin'
And when I say I got to leave
You wouldn't believe
All of the things that she'll do
And all of the things
That she'll say to make me stay
And I be like, 'Damn'

I'll be back someday
But she wanna go with me
To outer space
So we made love in the Milky Way
And then I send her on her way

Boy, you got a problem
(Problem)
And you ain't foolin' no one
But yourself

You're like a hot revolver
But you ain't killin' no one
But yourself

And so she's gone to party town
On her own
And you go by yourself
So all alone"


This is not a fkin storytelling song, all he's doing it talkin to and about the girl

its an imaginary story


expand your mind you weak human, your intellect is very weak, you need more vitamins for your body that god created for you, it is very simple to understand the story wayne is telling, now go help yourself, RIGHT NOW before its too late

[Tech N9ne]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

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[mirage42]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

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[The Rappereater]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

I agree he needs more story telling songs he didn't even one after jail and these topicless pushlines getting boring you feel me ? There are no connection between his pushlines he switches from one topic to another.

[iLLuZiON^]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

I agree he needs more story telling songs he didn't even one after jail and these topicless pushlines getting boring you feel me ? There are no connection between his pushlines he switches from one topic to another.

[WeezyFan]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

lala( not the one with busta rhymes) is definitely a storytelling track even though it's his life story it's still a story telling song.

its called La La La

the wack one with shit rhymes and got horny is called La La

I agree he needs more story telling songs he didn't even one after jail and these topicless pushlines getting boring you feel me ? There are no connection between his pushlines he switches from one topic to another.

we only heard features and singles yet

hes tellin a story on some features and his singles normally don't tell stories.

and shit he got lots of story telling songs

gonna name a few:

Everything
I Miss My Dawgs
No problems
That somebody
What He Does
I Hate Love
How Can Something
Paradice
No Quitter (??)

nkflier23 obviously haven't heard much music by Wayne, but it looks like you just made this thread to hate, we mentioned alot of story telling songs but still you mean they arent story telling, what exactly do you mean with story telling? you want him to make a song like ''there was once a princess in a wonderland stuck in a building, looking for a prince'' ?

Yea, I would too like to hear a story telling song from Weezy. I Miss My Dawgs is kinda a story telling in my opinion... And Everything too... But I think Eminem is tha king of story telling (from those alive).

yeah but most of his story telling songs are emo..

[eckostar]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

eminem is the king of story telling song.. wayne is different.. he got his own style in giving us good music.. he got some story song and all of them are great.. all we need to do now is to wait for his new song.. weezy will not disappoint us to his new album.. can't wait for the C4!! WEEZY ROCKS!!

[lilweezyfan]

Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

it was a freestyle in 2002 when he was telling a story
cant find it now
it was a dope guitar beat in the background
and the lyrics was dope