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  • #85
    Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

    lala( not the one with busta rhymes) is definitely a storytelling track even though it's his life story it's still a story telling song.

    though none of these songs come even a little close when comparing to em's song "stan" wayne does have scenario story telling tracks such as lisa marie, something you forgot. other songs you could maybe include - paradice, hot revolver all of these have a set scenario and waynes describes the event taking place throughout the song thus telling a story.

    for ex: on hot revolver the song starts out "do you have the time to listen to me whine/she askin who's on the other you diss me everytime/ i tell her baby ima star shyt ima above a star/ now i done got so high i forgotten who you are/

    he then goes on about how has to leave for some show i assume and tells the girl he'll be there next so call wherever you work at and use your off days for that week, then chours comes in which he states is his conscious telling that he has a problem.

    in the second verse he goes on talking about the crazy things his girl does to get him to stay when tells her he has to leave .....etc you get the point

    I JUST CAME UP WITH A SUMMARY FOR HOT REVOLVER. YOU KNOW WHAT YOU NEED TO CREATE A SUMMARY RIGHT, YEP YOU GUESSED IT
    A FUKKIN STORY -__-
    Last edited by mirage42; 03-27-2011, 08:39 AM.
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    • #86
      Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

      Misunderstood.



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      • #87
        Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

        His verse in Love Affair is telling a story


        "I stole a Bible, is that a sin"?

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        • #88
          Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

          Originally posted by mirage42 View Post
          lala( not the one with busta rhymes) is definitely a storytelling track even though it's his life story it's still a story telling song.

          though none of these songs come even a little close when comparing to em's song "stan" wayne does have scenario story telling tracks such as lisa marie, something you forgot. other songs you could maybe include - paradice, hot revolver all of these have a set scenario and waynes describes the event taking place throughout the song thus telling a story.

          for ex: on hot revolver the song starts out "do you have the time to listen to me whine/she askin who's on the other you diss me everytime/ i tell her baby ima star shyt ima above a star/ now i done got so high i forgotten who you are/

          he then goes on about how has to leave for some show i assume and tells the girl he'll be there next so call wherever you work at and use your off days for that week, then chours comes in which he states is his conscious telling that he has a problem.

          in the second verse he goes on talking about the crazy things his girl does to get him to stay when tells her he has to leave .....etc you get the point

          I JUST CAME UP WITH A SUMMARY FOR HOT REVOLVER. YOU KNOW WHAT YOU NEED TO CREATE A SUMMARY RIGHT, YEP YOU GUESSED IT
          A FUKKIN STORY -__-
          nigga look and read these lyrics

          "Young mullah, baby
          Umm, young mullah, baby

          She says, do you have the time
          To listen to me whine
          She askin' who's on the other line?
          You diss me every time

          I tell 'em, baby I'm a star
          Shit, I'm above a star
          And now I done got so high
          I did forgotten who you are
          (Are, are)

          Oh oh oh, ah, oh oh eh eh
          Ah ah
          Oh oh oh, ah, oh oh eh eh
          Oh oh oh, ah, oh oh eh eh
          Ah ah

          I'm in love with you
          But I can't be with you
          Tomorrow I'll be back
          Up on the first flight
          Right up out of town

          Young mullah, baby

          Hop back in my spaceship
          Girl, I gotta drop your ass off
          (Oh oh eh eh)

          Last night, yeah we were spaced girl
          You love it, girl, I gotta take off
          (Oh oh eh eh)
          'Cause Imma be here next week
          So call your company and take off
          Oh oh oh, yeah oh oh eh

          'Cause she say, "Wayne, Wayne"
          So she got me all impatient
          Cry me a river
          I can hear my conscious
          While I say aloud

          Boy, you got a problem
          [ From: HOT REVOLVER Lyrics - LIL' WAYNE ]
          (Problem)
          And you ain't foolin' no one
          But yourself

          You're like a hot revolver
          (Hot revolver)
          But you ain't killin' no one
          But yourself

          And so she's gone to party town
          On her own
          And you go by yourself
          So all alone

          I told her, I can be with her
          But I can't be with her
          As much as she like me to
          She like me too much
          That's the problem

          Oh my God, then Shorty be whillin'
          And when I say I got to leave
          You wouldn't believe
          All of the things that she'll do
          And all of the things
          That she'll say to make me stay
          And I be like, 'Damn'

          I'll be back someday
          But she wanna go with me
          To outer space
          So we made love in the Milky Way
          And then I send her on her way

          Boy, you got a problem
          (Problem)
          And you ain't foolin' no one
          But yourself

          You're like a hot revolver
          But you ain't killin' no one
          But yourself

          And so she's gone to party town
          On her own
          And you go by yourself
          So all alone"


          This is not a fkin storytelling song, all he's doing it talkin to and about the girl

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          • #89
            Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

            Originally posted by nkflier23 View Post
            nigga look and read these lyrics

            "Young mullah, baby
            Umm, young mullah, baby

            She says, do you have the time
            To listen to me whine
            She askin' who's on the other line?
            You diss me every time

            I tell 'em, baby I'm a star
            Shit, I'm above a star
            And now I done got so high
            I did forgotten who you are
            (Are, are)

            Oh oh oh, ah, oh oh eh eh
            Ah ah
            Oh oh oh, ah, oh oh eh eh
            Oh oh oh, ah, oh oh eh eh
            Ah ah

            I'm in love with you
            But I can't be with you
            Tomorrow I'll be back
            Up on the first flight
            Right up out of town

            Young mullah, baby

            Hop back in my spaceship
            Girl, I gotta drop your ass off
            (Oh oh eh eh)

            Last night, yeah we were spaced girl
            You love it, girl, I gotta take off
            (Oh oh eh eh)
            'Cause Imma be here next week
            So call your company and take off
            Oh oh oh, yeah oh oh eh

            'Cause she say, "Wayne, Wayne"
            So she got me all impatient
            Cry me a river
            I can hear my conscious
            While I say aloud

            Boy, you got a problem
            [ From: HOT REVOLVER Lyrics - LIL' WAYNE ]
            (Problem)
            And you ain't foolin' no one
            But yourself

            You're like a hot revolver
            (Hot revolver)
            But you ain't killin' no one
            But yourself

            And so she's gone to party town
            On her own
            And you go by yourself
            So all alone

            I told her, I can be with her
            But I can't be with her
            As much as she like me to
            She like me too much
            That's the problem

            Oh my God, then Shorty be whillin'
            And when I say I got to leave
            You wouldn't believe
            All of the things that she'll do
            And all of the things
            That she'll say to make me stay
            And I be like, 'Damn'

            I'll be back someday
            But she wanna go with me
            To outer space
            So we made love in the Milky Way
            And then I send her on her way

            Boy, you got a problem
            (Problem)
            And you ain't foolin' no one
            But yourself

            You're like a hot revolver
            But you ain't killin' no one
            But yourself

            And so she's gone to party town
            On her own
            And you go by yourself
            So all alone"


            This is not a fkin storytelling song, all he's doing it talkin to and about the girl
            its an imaginary story


            expand your mind you weak human, your intellect is very weak, you need more vitamins for your body that god created for you, it is very simple to understand the story wayne is telling, now go help yourself, RIGHT NOW before its too late

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            • #90
              Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

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              • #91
                Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

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                Last edited by mirage42; 03-28-2011, 03:14 AM. Reason: wrong guy
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                • #92
                  Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

                  I agree he needs more story telling songs he didn't even one after jail and these topicless pushlines getting boring you feel me ? There are no connection between his pushlines he switches from one topic to another.
                  Oooh shit, motherfucker, God Damn

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                  • #93
                    Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

                    Originally posted by The Rappereater View Post
                    I agree he needs more story telling songs he didn't even one after jail and these topicless pushlines getting boring you feel me ? There are no connection between his pushlines he switches from one topic to another.

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                    • #94
                      Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

                      Originally posted by mirage42 View Post
                      lala( not the one with busta rhymes) is definitely a storytelling track even though it's his life story it's still a story telling song.
                      its called La La La

                      the wack one with shit rhymes and got horny is called La La

                      Originally posted by The Rappereater View Post
                      I agree he needs more story telling songs he didn't even one after jail and these topicless pushlines getting boring you feel me ? There are no connection between his pushlines he switches from one topic to another.
                      we only heard features and singles yet

                      hes tellin a story on some features and his singles normally don't tell stories.

                      and shit he got lots of story telling songs

                      gonna name a few:

                      Everything
                      I Miss My Dawgs
                      No problems
                      That somebody
                      What He Does
                      I Hate Love
                      How Can Something
                      Paradice
                      No Quitter (??)

                      nkflier23 obviously haven't heard much music by Wayne, but it looks like you just made this thread to hate, we mentioned alot of story telling songs but still you mean they arent story telling, what exactly do you mean with story telling? you want him to make a song like ''there was once a princess in a wonderland stuck in a building, looking for a prince'' ?

                      Originally posted by LilWeezy-Wee View Post
                      Yea, I would too like to hear a story telling song from Weezy. I Miss My Dawgs is kinda a story telling in my opinion... And Everything too... But I think Eminem is tha king of story telling (from those alive).
                      yeah but most of his story telling songs are emo..
                      Last edited by WeezyFan; 03-28-2011, 05:24 AM.


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                      • #95
                        Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

                        eminem is the king of story telling song.. wayne is different.. he got his own style in giving us good music.. he got some story song and all of them are great.. all we need to do now is to wait for his new song.. weezy will not disappoint us to his new album.. can't wait for the C4!! WEEZY ROCKS!!

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                        • #96
                          Re: Wayne needs a storytelling song

                          it was a freestyle in 2002 when he was telling a story
                          cant find it now
                          it was a dope guitar beat in the background
                          and the lyrics was dope

                          I hate them thirsty bitches
                          Cut them off like circumcision
                          -Lil Wayne

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