official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

[astanfield68]

"30 mins to the top" (30 mins 2 n.o. instrumental)
yeah im pacing the floor lookin 4 that inspiration
man i been through more shit than a devestated haitian
if u dont know what im bout, well here's the explination
i was put here to kill any beat, yea thats annialation
like a new church im tryin to build my congrigation
my name is a-frame, and i am no imitation
i do this shit for fun, neva needed motivation
at the end of 4 rounds all i hear's congratulations
yea i guess that means im 30 mins from the top
long road there but im neva gonna stop
dont get mad at me cuz i get more thoat than cough drop
you pussies are more fragile than a fuckin china shop
you should wear a tattoo thats says handle with care
could have ya whole crew wit u and still wouldnt be fair
usain bolt fast, if u slow then and keep up
cuz im the shit like 2 girls and one cup
now hold up one min homie i aint ever done
my lyrics leave u prayin like u were fuckin nun
yea i know a lil french so start kissin on my gun
imma give 30 minutes dont walk, u better run
straight to the n.o. where the saints be steady winning
they are the fuckin best, i cant lie, im never sinning
i think i found that inspiration i said in the beginning
a-frame is bout to walk it off like the bottom of 9th inning

1st lyric post on here ... tell me what u think... had to do it jus to give yall a preview of the written tourney from me. haha

[Artille]

Re: !st rap post from me on here!! astanfield68

*Please make this your official thread to put all of your written raps in*

Anyways, that was pretty sick. Keep up the good work, from the looks of this you should have no problem making it past the first round. You have real potential.

EDIT: Is A-Frame your rap name? If so do you want me to switch your name in the tournament to that?

[astanfield68]

official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/

yea its aframe, should have cleared that up... i should have this recorded along with a few songs soon.... im actually with a group so ill get them to post some stuff on here. and thanks, lookin to go far in this thing haha

oh if u see know money or a.r.t work in any of our verses thata our group name

[Artille]

Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/

yea its aframe, should have cleared that up... i should have this recorded along with a few songs soon.... im actually with a group so ill get them to post some stuff on here. and thanks, lookin to go far in this thing haha

oh if u see know money or a.r.t work in any of our verses thata our group name

Alright I will edit your name in the bracket next round...

And good to know, tell them about Tha Studio, we are trying to improve and increase the community. Can't wait to see ore of your work.

[astanfield68]

Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68

Oh lets do it (instrumental)


oh lets do it like its 2010
im all about that diesel like my first name wan vin
a.r.t. work comin tell dem bitches betta lay low
and if they ask why tell jus because we say so
flow hotter than a towel straight out of the dryer
nothin elses but kush thats one thing that i require
yea my shit be purple you got time to admire
if u say u aint impressed u a mother fuckin liar
write a couple rhymes down and they say begginers luck
but when we spittin on the mic everybody better duck
we know money, art work baby neva eva gave a fuck
and my raps always heated so go call the fire truck
while i am in the lead other bitches cannot qualify
know money we the best, too bad we dont ever fuckin try
always smoke the finest bout to buy a house up in the sky
can make quarter pound disapear in one blink of an eye

tell me wat u think... throw on the instrumental if u need it

[YoungTune.]

Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68

Oh lets do it (instrumental)


oh lets do it like its 2010
im all about that diesel like my first name wan vin
a.r.t. work comin tell dem bitches betta lay low
and if they ask why tell jus because we say so
flow hotter than a towel straight out of the dryer
nothin elses but kush thats one thing that i require
yea my shit be purple you got time to admire
if u say u aint impressed u a mother fuckin liar
write a couple rhymes down and they say begginers luck
but when we spittin on the mic everybody better duck
we know money, art work baby neva eva gave a fuck
and my raps always heated so go call the fire truck
while i am in the lead other bitches cannot qualify
know money we the best, too bad we dont ever fuckin try
always smoke the finest bout to buy a house up in the sky
can make quarter pound disapear in one blink of an eye

tell me wat u think... throw on the instrumental if u need it

Beasty Bruh!

[astanfield68]

Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68

thanx bro if anyone wants to colaborate with me or the group im in hit me wit a pm... feed back on everything is appreciated.

[astanfield68]

Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

Aint i instrumental

jumped out tha bed this mornin said aint i
stupid fruity crazy swag like a fuckin painta
i will serve ya ass like im a muh fuckin waita
and im lovin everybody aint a fuckin hata
looks like im turnin into everybodys rival
if i do they will be very suicidal
turn dey ass bloody like they never took a midol
take me out one time and then you witness a revival
aint i the best you ever did see
aint we on the rise cuz we know money
thats me aframe, flo ro, and t
and our raps are are boiling 212 degrees*
yall dudes sloppy like u never do the dishes
4 that lil stunt you will be swimming with the fishes
cuz we make shit happen like we got a bunch of wishes
and we ballin all night all you hear's a bunch of swishes

*prononce 212 like two twelve instead of two hundred twelve

jus a lil verse i put together recently

[astanfield68]

Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

shit lost in the 2nd round might as well put out some material lol

Me and my drank

dreams of the money and how im gonna make it
if a rule in my way, guess im gonna have to break it
if they got what i want then ill jus have to take it
jus tryin to be me man i never have to fake it
myrtle beach bum here, yea livin life easy
im all about the cheddar but aint never been cheezy
the thought of being broke makes me feel queezy
so i spark up a blunt and crank a lil weezy
apologizes 1st for our behavior
we jus three muskateers jus like we xavier*
and we smash any beat to repair
think wat u want about man i dnt really care
now im sittin here its jus me and my drank
sippin on it so much my mind just drew a blank
as im looking to the left t is lighting up the the dank
and we smoke it till its cashed take it to the bank

* xavier muskateers is a college

[astanfield68]

Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

D.O.A.

run this town like my name usain bolt
and i gotta wolfpack but i aint no tory holt
keeping that longhorn wit me im the real mccoy like colt
and this the uprising, matter fact call it revolt
art work baby rap creative like picaso
we be steady risin other rapper they jus plateau
gotta find some brain like my middle name was scarecrow
and im all about my bitches like the the eukanuba dog show
thinkin of the chances im bout to go h.a.m.
betta dodge outta my or im gonna have to ram
man i ace this beat like a final exam
but aint gotta ounce of sense like i got 27 grams
it is d.o.a. but i aint talkin bout a osama
my rap style's dramatic but aint lookin 4 the drama
u pressin on my buttons i put the shotty on ya momma
the story of ya life will get a period not a comma
u think u are the best, ha, moment of hilarity
she give it up to me, ha, moment of charity
wont find no one like us, ya got a moment of rarity
and i mean what i say, moment of sincerity

any feedback or tips are appreciated

[astanfield68]

Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

All the way turned up instrumental (bliss diss)

this is how i spit when im lookin 2 diss
i put the middle finger up and i am pointing at bliss
we supposed to be rappin stop tryin to be poetic
nobody ever loved u bliss, oh shit i really said it
your whole life story sounds jus so damn pathetic
im a real rapper man, you jus too fuckin synthetic
before i saw ya comment i was jus gonna forget it
respond to this now, i promise that you will regret it
im bout to shoot some words that will make you hit the deck
how you win that round man, you suckin on artillies neck?
much love to the judges man i never been a hater
but this fake ass bitch won becuz he's a moderator
(hook)
you can say no bias but i never will believe
how the hell did bliss win? thats what im trying to concieve
since im goin in might as well get really ruthless
got that mike tyson flo, always leave ya ass toothless
before u even say it you are no buster douglas
man i posess excess sucess never needed any recess
i can see all in your future, it involves a lack of progress
fruity poet turned fake rapper but fuck it i just digress
quit while u can thats exactly what i suggest
wave ya white flag too cuz you under so much distress
thinkin bliss is the best, well im sorry there's no contest
i dont wanna hurt your feelings im jus being really honest
hook
if what i spit's illegal, ill commit another crime
my shit's prime, you say the same shit every fuckin time
my raps always ten, but in slang terms its a dime
hell i went off topic some, but at least i tried to rhyme
so turn my ass up and turn the poet back down
tryin to walk in pac's shoes, when u are really just a clown
bliss if u've gotten this far then u're wearing a frown
man im coming for the throne, so someone hand me my crown

take it how u wanna. i havent been able to compete in the tournament in 4 ever cuz ive had bye's. but i saw a comment that disrespected me sayin "idk how u thought you had that round" in an arrogant way from bliss after i gave him congrats. refer back to the official page if u wanna. so therefore you get this.

[IgnoranceIsBliss]

Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

A-Frame, turn your name to A-shamed,
I'll leave a bullet hole in your membrane,
You call me a fruity poet, son I beat you,
In your prime, where's there sales to prove fool,
What the hell you gon' do dude,
Try beef me I'll eat you like a plate of food,
Just like when I raped your mom and ate her gash,
Then I got your sister to rape your dad,
I won for being a mod but you say no hate to the judges,
That's hypocritical and you say you're the best at this,
I mean fuck that, I'mma have to audio track on your ass,
But you're too pussy to step up to the mic so stay there in last,
Stay there and save your last breath, you're gonna need it,
I'm dissing you man, and I ain't even heated,
So no-name quit running around talking all bleated,
I'm nowhere near finished dissing you and already you defeated.