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  • #61
    Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

    why is it so tough to get feedback on here?

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    • #62
      Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

      Originally posted by astanfield68
      why is it so tough to get feedback on here?
      You ask for it!
      so here it go's

      This is B.I. Don
      fuck wut ever type shit
      u on,
      use the type
      two tipe
      when
      the beef is on,
      internet bully's
      I put slugs through
      ya champion hoody
      see me in the streets
      i hold heat and burn Garciavegas,
      reality rap holds light
      like life in LasVegas
      I tell kids if you sin
      you can still win
      if u know ur going to die
      then we met @ the end
      Mean while ehhhhhhhhh
      I'm tryin to fuck Tammy An Jen
      both of them lookin like twins
      skin completion of Cinnamon
      sip the Gin drop and bend
      then send next 2 in
      ya dig

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      • #63
        Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

        lol huh? Start your own thread bro it actually isnt bad after reading it a second time

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        • #64
          Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

          that flow is like JESUS
          nah i wont thread up a rap joint
          just wanted to see if there was some real comp
          word to mother dunn
          drake aint even see me
          on that level, hahhhh rappers

          100

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          • #65
            Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

            ohhhhh so u wanna battle?

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            • #66
              Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

              in the words of
              MOCHIO MAN RANDY SAVAGE WWF FAME

              OhhhhhhhhhhhhYeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

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              • #67
                Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

                Im back
                yea im back like a vertabrae
                colder than a winters day
                just emptied out my bank account, no tellin what my pockets weigh
                open up ya ears homie listen what i fuckin say
                could die any min so im living life just for today
                i hope i see tomorrow cuz i got more weed to fuckin burn
                jus put it to my lips, inhale, and lose all my concerns
                pass it to the left to roan cuz its bout his turn
                and then it goes tyler man we'll never eva learn
                how to grow up, all we do is blow up
                and when im spittin on the mic it's lyrical throw up
                damn right its nasty, man thats how its gonna be
                what i say is from the heart so my rhymes are quality
                and other rappers cannot "qualifee", oops i meant qualify
                damn i am fly, and im high, you know i cannot fuckin lie
                im so high i jus purchased real estate up in the sky
                im back muh fucker kiss all you hopes and dreams goodbye

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                • #68
                  Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

                  OK! OK! OK!
                  Im back in NYC from a CT party
                  on a CIROC night ya dig!

                  U in over ya head
                  i walk past the living dead
                  dumb def & blind
                  is wut 5% said
                  we thank MOBB DEEP
                  for that album Infamous
                  I trade in my fists
                  for a rubergrip fourfiff
                  fuckin with me dunn
                  u runnin in to bricks
                  tare off ya face
                  scratch u off my list
                  sixteen years in projects
                  my mentality is pop every bullet in the clip
                  Well
                  you want to rap about jewels
                  thing you aint never had or seen Son u telling Tails
                  i live in real time
                  snatchin up ya girl
                  my back is marked
                  she scratch me up with those nails
                  i put more on her face then she can bare
                  i skeet skee on her cloths an hair
                  she still send kites an cash
                  while im in jail

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                  • #69
                    Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

                    ok heres something i wrote over the oh lets do it beat a little while ago havent looked at it since lets hear some feedback



                    plenty niggas done this track/
                    its my turn turn the beat up/
                    ud think im a jersey nigga the way i beat the beat up/
                    louis's what i fucking flaunt
                    fuck ur sister and your aunt
                    bouht a pound of purple shit bought to roll a purple blunt.

                    this the best ull ever see
                    thats a fuckin gurantee
                    im goin in not pullin out call that shit pregnancy
                    fuck u if u disagree
                    nobody as hot as me
                    like u no im raw dog, come and get ur std.
                    call me snuggie
                    stupid rich
                    i dont fuck just any bitch
                    finger on the rreta switch
                    bullets fly if u dare to twitch
                    leave a nigga in a ditch
                    dnt take shit from anybody
                    call me mr so much green aka mr. fukin st patty

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                    • #70
                      Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

                      Plenty money

                      yea it took a hot min 4 the beat to fuckin drop
                      bout to stap up my boots cuz im runnin to the top
                      of the mountain, leave you poutin,
                      drinkin up all the syrup like a fuckin water fountain
                      paper be countin, dont be doubtin
                      if ya tryin to come our way best believe we are reroutin
                      jus hand the seed to jay and they always will be sproutin
                      we got alotta money like we fuckin tiger woods
                      if you lookin 4 the sticky my boy blake has all the goods
                      got the weed, got the pills, and we always keep the cheddar
                      please shout out the name if you think that someones better
                      we all so damn fly we bout to grow some feathers
                      its gettin rainy in the club, but they always love the weather

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                      • #71
                        Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

                        poor mic and quality but tell me about my flow or how i need to improve something

                        30 mins to the top
                        http://limelinx.com/files/82f222ce32...175bfaa2ecae2e

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                        • #72
                          Re: official rapping thread 4 astanfield68/a-frame

                          Somethin over Waynes track Eat U Alive

                          YEAH yeah YEAH

                          O damn its him again!
                          U DUCKIN IS A NEW TREND
                          like them fuckin skinny paints
                          get stomp OUT with black timb's
                          pull the pump on ya friends
                          Im eat you alive
                          then jump in the benz
                          due to the resection
                          i hold a MAC 11
                          fuck 3and ahalf
                          to get in the game is 7
                          ask DRAKE whos his connection
                          he always in Queens
                          I bout Weezy to the P's
                          whos fuckin with me
                          i put a hem on ya long jeans
                          and french kiss this track retardidly
                          everything else gets body

                          goodnight

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