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  • Written Tournament *Warm Up Thread*

    I See That It Isnt A Thread Where People Can Just Post Writtens Back And Forth And I Wasnt Gonna Go Search For Pages And Pages For One So I Made One So People Can Warm Up For The Written Tournament

    Wrote This To O Lets Do It......

    Now Ummmm Its Been A Minute Since Wrote Sum
    Fuck It O Leh Do It Like Im Wocka Flocka Flame Bruh
    Im So Off The Chain Cuz Aint No Leashes Over Her Nun
    Just Doubled Up The Money Mary-Kate And Ashley Olsen
    Im Mays And I Go So Dumb Retard Flow I Spit Yuck
    Man WAT THE FUCK Goin Up Against Fredd Yup
    Damn 2 Bad For Fredd Huh Aint No Good Battlin Mays
    And I Swear If This Was Skool I Would Have Strait AYY's

    Just A Little Something To Get Me Back In the Mood Of Writing

    The Ayy's Line Is A Refrence To OJ The Juiceman Since They On The Same Label
    RunTellDat!!:Mays '91 The ALBUM 4th Qtr.2012
    Follow Me On Twitter @HiMyNameIsShawn

  • #2
    Re: Written Tournament *Warm Up Thread*

    I like this idea even though I'm not competing (I'm hosting). Time for me to lay down a fresh 8 bars real quick to keep this going.

    Time for me to follow up that boy Dizzy Mays
    This won't be a dis, so just sit back and blaze
    Like I was in county, I got bars for days
    'How did he think of that?', I got my ways
    Quit worrying about my rhymes and just smoke the haze
    It's the veteran writer, got the forums in a craze
    My dollars so hard, you could never bend these
    You're a fucking square like a burger at Wendy's


    Just a little something to get me started lol. I want some competition since I'm not competing in my tournament.

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    • #3
      Re: Written Tournament *Warm Up Thread*

      I got some shit 2 follow Art, Now hol up and lemme start.
      I'll leave ya ass broke and pushin cans in a cart.
      My lyrics will make u have a cow like Bart.
      Im da shit lil homie, u jus a wet fart.
      My bars is straight cold like they covered in snow.
      They flow like water so get in ur boat and row.
      Im funky toes. Addictive like blow.
      Fuck wit me, I'll cancel u like a bad show.

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      • #4
        Re: Written Tournament *Warm Up Thread*

        I'm judging but fuck it,

        Yo john, those lines were pretty good
        I know all yo homies got you understood
        These bars right here, ain't nothin' but a test
        Fuck with me and I'll leave you a bloody mess
        I haven't written in a while, i'm on some other shit
        My words are so incredible, you haven't heard of it
        *sigh* Just had to take a pause, now its time to leave you this gift like santa clause

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        • #5
          Re: Written Tournament *Warm Up Thread*

          Pause..No Beat Just Heat Im On My Oven Flow
          But My Shit Be Way Hotter Then The Oven Doe
          Dizzy Mays Yea Follow Me I Know Where To Go
          Cuz I Been Known To Get Around Like The Letter O
          O And Im Some Shit That Aint Been Ate Yet
          Ol Skool Bet Im In Ya Girlfriend Tape Deck
          Future I Bet Im All In The MP3 She Watch Me Like A DVD
          Dizzy Mays Twitter Check Who Else Followin Me?
          RunTellDat!!:Mays '91 The ALBUM 4th Qtr.2012
          Follow Me On Twitter @HiMyNameIsShawn

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          • #6
            Re: Written Tournament *Warm Up Thread*

            First since forever. Can I get feedback?

            Too much thoughts in my head, too much pain in my brain
            My thoughts floats away like it falls beneath the drains
            I am searching for a change, but the nights remain the same..
            Trying to get higher so I'm choosing a bigger gain
            Thinking about memories as it drives me insane
            I'm on the road to success, am I in the right lane?
            Right now I'm in the finish line, you can't stop me
            I'm getting the gold, the fame, and all you do is watch me...
            Never backed out, my mind is set for a winner
            I'm always in trouble like I'm a 24 hour sinner
            A rookie here, but don't seem like a beginner
            Check me out my stacks are much thicker...
            Haven't been succesful, how can I just stop
            I let it all go, theres no way reaching the top
            But... (Pause) I gotta stay focus
            The world is in my hands, man I have to hold this
            Hold it tight and never let it drop
            Money on my mind, so I can never stop, Uhhhhh!
            Cash Flow Ent

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            • #7
              Re: Written Tournament *Warm Up Thread*

              I'm goin in Heavy a girls 1st flow.
              I smoke so much my piss green not yellow.
              I'ma real G, ur a gay fellow.
              My styles above ur head no need to get low.
              I'm ridin my Bike till my legs fall off.
              U wanna be Jesus till u nailed 2 a Cross.
              U wanna be BIG til ur life is lost.
              & U wanna be Pac till dem shots go off.

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              • #8
                Re: Written Tournament *Warm Up Thread*

                Originally posted by Lil' Jay
                First since forever. Can I get feedback?

                Too much thoughts in my head, too much pain in my brain
                My thoughts floats away like it falls beneath the drains
                I am searching for a change, but the nights remain the same..
                Trying to get higher so I'm choosing a bigger gain
                Thinking about memories as it drives me insane
                I'm on the road to success, am I in the right lane?
                Right now I'm in the finish line, you can't stop me
                I'm getting the gold, the fame, and all you do is watch me...
                Never backed out, my mind is set for a winner
                I'm always in trouble like I'm a 24 hour sinner
                A rookie here, but don't seem like a beginner
                Check me out my stacks are much thicker...
                Haven't been succesful, how can I just stop
                I let it all go, theres no way reaching the top
                But... (Pause) I gotta stay focus
                The world is in my hands, man I have to hold this
                Hold it tight and never let it drop
                Money on my mind, so I can never stop, Uhhhhh!
                I like it. Go Hard son.

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                • #9
                  Re: Written Tournament *Warm Up Thread*

                  Originally posted by johnzalewski1322
                  Originally posted by Lil' Jay
                  First since forever. Can I get feedback?

                  Too much thoughts in my head, too much pain in my brain
                  My thoughts floats away like it falls beneath the drains
                  I am searching for a change, but the nights remain the same..
                  Trying to get higher so I'm choosing a bigger gain
                  Thinking about memories as it drives me insane
                  I'm on the road to success, am I in the right lane?
                  Right now I'm in the finish line, you can't stop me
                  I'm getting the gold, the fame, and all you do is watch me...
                  Never backed out, my mind is set for a winner
                  I'm always in trouble like I'm a 24 hour sinner
                  A rookie here, but don't seem like a beginner
                  Check me out my stacks are much thicker...
                  Haven't been succesful, how can I just stop
                  I let it all go, theres no way reaching the top
                  But... (Pause) I gotta stay focus
                  The world is in my hands, man I have to hold this
                  Hold it tight and never let it drop
                  Money on my mind, so I can never stop, Uhhhhh!
                  I like it. Go Hard son.
                  Thanks man. I've changed my ways.
                  Cash Flow Ent

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                  • #10
                    Re: Written Tournament *Warm Up Thread*

                    Originally posted by Lil' Jay
                    First since forever. Can I get feedback?

                    Too much thoughts in my head, too much pain in my brain
                    My thoughts floats away like it falls beneath the drains
                    I am searching for a change, but the nights remain the same..
                    Trying to get higher so I'm choosing a bigger gain
                    Thinking about memories as it drives me insane
                    I'm on the road to success, am I in the right lane?
                    Right now I'm in the finish line, you can't stop me
                    I'm getting the gold, the fame, and all you do is watch me...
                    Never backed out, my mind is set for a winner
                    I'm always in trouble like I'm a 24 hour sinner
                    A rookie here, but don't seem like a beginner
                    Check me out my stacks are much thicker...
                    Haven't been succesful, how can I just stop
                    I let it all go, theres no way reaching the top
                    But... (Pause) I gotta stay focus
                    The world is in my hands, man I have to hold this
                    Hold it tight and never let it drop
                    Money on my mind, so I can never stop, Uhhhhh!

                    Damn That Shit The Truth
                    RunTellDat!!:Mays '91 The ALBUM 4th Qtr.2012
                    Follow Me On Twitter @HiMyNameIsShawn

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                    • #11
                      Re: Written Tournament *Warm Up Thread*

                      Im so sick with my flow, like my words got the flu
                      Ya crew like the half time performance, everyones like "the who"?
                      Bitchhhhhhh, ya crew in nonexistent
                      I stay with hiphop, yall like to stay distant
                      Basically yall just bitches, and basically im just the alpha male
                      And if yall aint feelin' my words, imma have to yell
                      And yall gunna have to fail, cause im always winning
                      And my records like tires, cause you know they always spinning
                      I getta lotta girls, shout out to my swag
                      And yalls girls like this tournament, i already got it in the bag!

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                      • #12
                        Re: Written Tournament *Warm Up Thread*

                        Make the trap say aye(add instrumental if needed lol)
                        keep my bitches bare you would think they were polar
                        stay on my grind u would think i was a molar
                        and our future is bright similar to the solar
                        and i bet it all man call me a high roller
                        quarter pound half a pound whole pound ,no
                        make sure the money ready everytime you swing my door
                        buissnes man feel we dnt play no games
                        number one rule in selling dont say no names
                        gucci said here comes the brick squad movement
                        and wocka said oh muh fuka lets do it
                        then i put u on ice jus and tell yo ass to cool it
                        leave ya as prayin like u chillin in the pulpit
                        da name a-frame man aint nobody greater
                        hotter than any lame like i live on the equator
                        givin longhorn and i "tex" they ass later
                        and i am an urban legend aint talkin no gator

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