YNR VS. imaginingechoes ( IMAGINING WON )!!!!

[YungMulaTheImage]

Re: YNR The Rockstar VS. xximaginingechoesxx

o, i dint c ur next sry

as i say once i'll say again
all your lil rhymes never ever end
cuz you rap one line out too much
so it dont flow it just sits like dust
your rhymes are so old, they are gatherin rust
and grillin up some trouble to me is a must
cuz this rap game is shit, and bitch u r too
just take this like a gift, from me to you
rip up the wrappin paper, and see what's inside
man, you'll see what i gave you, theres nothin to hide
i'll give you a bomb, that ticks 1, 2, 5
then KABOOM and you will die
cuz you are like mccain and i am obama
and i bet when you read this rap, you'll be in trauma
cuz this ain't dramatic, aint no drama
this is just tactic, like a battleship, HOLLA
and damn, again, your raps are so sleazy
and never forget, i am imaging and reezy

-pce-

[YungNRuthless]

Re: YNR The Rockstar VS. xximaginingechoesxx

o, i dint c ur next sry

as i say once i'll say again
all your lil rhymes never ever end
cuz you rap one line out too much
so it dont flow it just sits like dust
your rhymes are so old, they are gatherin rust
and grillin up some trouble to me is a must
cuz this rap game is shit, and bitch u r too
just take this like a gift, from me to you
rip up the wrappin paper, and see what's inside
man, you'll see what i gave you, theres nothin to hide
i'll give you a bomb, that ticks 1, 2, 5
then KABOOM and you will die
cuz you are like mccain and i am obama
and i bet when you read this rap, you'll be in trauma
cuz this ain't dramatic, aint no drama
this is just tactic, like a battleship, HOLLA
and damn, again, your raps are so sleazy
and never forget, i am imaging and reezy

-pce-

where are your multiples ? lol im not saying ur bad im just saying u can do better

[YungMulaTheImage]

Re: YNR The Rockstar VS. xximaginingechoesxx

multiples?

[YungNRuthless]

Re: YNR The Rockstar VS. xximaginingechoesxx

multiples?

making more then just the last word to your line rhyme like
look two last words rhyme [ ]

leave your clothes red like where the [B'z] (play)
leave your body blue like where the [C'z] (stay)..
in the winter we going hit em with a [heat] (wave)..
that revolver stay spinning like a [Dee] (Jay)..

makes ur rhyming game better there called multiples

[YungMulaTheImage]

Re: YNR The Rockstar VS. xximaginingechoesxx

o idk any technical shit ahah i just rap

[YungNRuthless]

Re: YNR The Rockstar VS. xximaginingechoesxx

o idk any technical shit ahah i just rap

lol just trying to help, i see potential

[YungMulaTheImage]

Re: YNR The Rockstar VS. xximaginingechoesxx ( VOTE NOW! )

tell em 2 read all 4 of em

[YungMulaTheImage]

Re: YNR The Rockstar VS. imaginingechoes (VOTE NOW!) READ ALL 4

only they vote righ

[Patriarch]

Re: YNR The Rockstar VS. imaginingechoes (VOTE NOW!) READ ALL 4

I share trill's thoughts on the format of these battles. I have to give this one to imagining, though. YNR's lines were better written, but lacked disses - a must have in battle rap.

[YungMulaTheImage]

Re: YNR The Rockstar VS. imaginingechoes (VOTE NOW!) READ ALL 4

ight when is the deadline 4 votes, when we stop the votes

[trillphill]

Re: YNR The Rockstar VS. imaginingechoes (VOTE NOW!) READ ALL 4

EDIT* just read Patriarch's post after i did all this, and i must agree. you can't compete if you don't diss the person, and punches are what's most important inside of the dissing which YNR lacked.

Im fresh, fly as a muthafucking feather..
me and rap like gloves on mayweather..
imagining you cant do it like me, never
i met his bitch last night, named heather
i said 'baby you hot like a desert'..
i said 'i just could eat you like dessert'
she said 'your name YNR ive done research'..
i said 'i just could wear you like a t-shirt'..
she said 'my friend like you, but take me first',
i said 'i wanna fuck you like middle finger'..
thats when i found out she was a scream-er..
i told her 'i can turn you into a sing-er'..
and right now i got that bitch in my beam-er
and imagining looking like 'have you seen her?'

damn, you really over- did that rhyme
i bet i could, but, i just dont have the time
cuz people like me be hustlin all day
and you been addicted to the couch since last may
hey, how do them potatoes taste?
ha, i guess all my time is goin to waste
cuz i gotta compete in a too- easy race
wipe those tears off your face
and when you be cryin, i bet that aint outta place
cuz when people see you
i bet none of them ever wanna be you
so i ride through town in my cadillac
where your's at? back in the dealer- ship cuz you ride too fat
man, i wanna see your garage
i bet it's looks somethin like an empty parkin lot
so, lets stop talking bout these cars
i knock you out to see the stars
thats the closest you're ever gon get to Hollywood
cuz you are lame, and im so good

-pce-

*and no offense man jus workin the diss*

that one easily goes to Imagining. YNR's didn't have any punches directed at Imaging and punches make or break your whole diss. they were practically all at his "girl" who's not in the rap battle.

Yo shut up, talking he say she say..
gunna have more then one goon on your line like a three way,
then im off to the freeway, gunna look like the O.J chase on replay..
see i tried to give him leeway, but im done taking it E-zay..
you guys gotta see meh when i talk you better believe meh..
im the hardest in the north east west & south ay..
leave your clothes red like where the B'z play
leave your body blue like where the C'z stay..
in the winter we going hit em with a heat wave..
that revolver stay spinning like a Dee Jay..
when i draw you better run like a relay..
or get low like flo rida & t-pain
im the shit like a turd in this bitch
dope like a bird in this bitch..
and if you never heard of me bitch
you know that i just murdered this shit

o, i dint c ur next sry

as i say once i'll say again
all your lil rhymes never ever end
cuz you rap one line out too much
so it dont flow it just sits like dust
your rhymes are so old, they are gatherin rust
and grillin up some trouble to me is a must
cuz this rap game is shit, and bitch u r too
just take this like a gift, from me to you
rip up the wrappin paper, and see what's inside
man, you'll see what i gave you, theres nothin to hide
i'll give you a bomb, that ticks 1, 2, 5
then KABOOM and you will die
cuz you are like mccain and i am obama
and i bet when you read this rap, you'll be in trauma
cuz this ain't dramatic, aint no drama
this is just tactic, like a battleship, HOLLA
and damn, again, your raps are so sleazy
and never forget, i am imaging and reezy

-pce-

YNR brought his better in this one, his flowed pretty good and had some multies, but multies aren't as important as the punches in disses. I'd have to give YNR a victory by a little bit on the second one, but overall imagining was more consistent with punches.
Vote: Imagining

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: YNR The Rockstar VS. imaginingechoes (VOTE NOW!) READ ALL 4

78% with Imagin
Dayum
Game over