Bliss - Genesis Mixtape Thread

[IgnoranceIsBliss]

Intro:Quik
http://limelinx.com/files/d7c5fde36a99d ... 0a1060672d


The Anthem
http://limelinx.com/files/3f02d05502a56 ... 554d43ca47

2 tracks from my debut mixtape.
Props to Young Fire for the mastering of these songs.
Please don't get offended I used these ones Breezy, Young Fire is just so dope at mastering.

[Safe_Kid]

Re: Bliss - Genesis Mixtape Thread

Nice to see you making moves Bliss,

[YoungFire420]

Re: Bliss - Genesis Mixtape Thread

Intro:Quik - Love the flow at the begginning, but flow was consistent pretty much throughout the song ( Fell off a couple times though). Sick lyrics too. Love this one.

The Anthem - Really love the flow at the start, fell of at times though. Lyrics on point too.

Overall, sick tracks. Sick beats. Id like to see some hooks though, and more consistent flow. But i know 100% you will just get better, so im not worried about ! Sounds like good first tracks from you, looking to be a good mixtape to make a name for yourself. Keep it up!

[Mr. BreezYbeatZ]

Re: Bliss - Genesis Mixtape Thread

The songs sound dope. The mastering is awsome, props to Young Fire, it's okay that he did it, I suck at mastering, I'll just stick to making beats

[IgnoranceIsBliss]

Re: Bliss - Genesis Mixtape Thread

The songs sound dope. The mastering is awsome, props to Young Fire, it's okay that he did it, I suck at mastering, I'll just stick to making beats

Just keep practicing, I'll give you every track I record bro so you can practice with them

[Mr. BreezYbeatZ]

Re: Bliss - Genesis Mixtape Thread

The songs sound dope. The mastering is awsome, props to Young Fire, it's okay that he did it, I suck at mastering, I'll just stick to making beats

Just keep practicing, I'll give you every track I record bro so you can practice with them

Awesome bro, I'm really glad I'm apart of this soon to be classic tape. It's my first big project.

[Enigma]

Re: Bliss - Genesis Mixtape Thread

You need to rhyme to the beat, it just sounds like you rapped for your song fast then threw the beat on.

[Artille]

Re: Bliss - Genesis Mixtape Thread

What's good Bliss,

So I listened to Intro and thought the lyrics were good (as I expected), but the quality of your mic (or how close you are to it) really throws this track off. I agree with Enigma that it sounds like you don't listen to the beat while you rap which you should probably do. If you ask me both songs had good lyrics, but you need to work on your flow.

[Enigma]

Re: Bliss - Genesis Mixtape Thread

And don't think you're Twista.

[IgnoranceIsBliss]

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Yeah I know I need to work on my flow, these are my first two audio tracks so they aren't gonna be that good at all.

[Pestrator]

Re: Bliss - Genesis Mixtape Thread

pretty decent tracks u just need to work on ur flow and the quality is not really good and try to have more nergy when u r rapping so itll keep the ppl listenin

[IgnoranceIsBliss]

Re: Bliss - Genesis Mixtape Thread

New track feat. YNR coming soon. Just wanna re-do my verse for it first