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    Something i wrote for my bro R.I.P

    Little brother, Yeah you know i miss you Nate,
    16 months old, Taken by the hands of Mister fate,
    I promise you though, Ill be on the list of greats,
    Making my lil bro proud, And resisting hate,
    Cant help to reminisce though, On a crisp flow,
    Your curly hair and happiness, I swear youd clap to this,
    I remember the day like yesterday, In second grade,
    You were in a coma, Visiting you and crying my eyes out,
    Holding your cold hand, And saying "Please dont die now",

    Little man, I took your stuffed bear, And slept with it,
    Walked around with it, Held it, Spent every breath with it,
    Until your life was taken, I swear part of me left with it,
    i had something about to unleash, And your death did it,
    I was only eight years old, Discovering fate was cold,
    Made me realize life wasnt just about cake and gold,
    I matured at the age of eight, But I wanted to create some hate,
    Mom made me go to counseling, Then I started to denounce schooling,
    Every action i did revolved around the thought you Nate,
    I still remember saving up my money on Halloween and I bought you a cape,

    At your funeral, I was too scared to cry with the crowd,
    I just closed my eyes and pictured you high in a cloud,
    Doing your little dance in the sky on a cloud,
    Laughing it up, With your sippy cup, I hope you miss me bud,
    Cuz without you my worlds not as fun, You were 16 months of heaven,
    But it wasnt until you got there, That heaven officially begun,

    I just want to tell you that Im doing better lately,
    Those occasional thoughts of you help calm and sedate me,
    Im doing better in school, In fact Im doing greatly,
    Honors classes, Man look what your lil self made me,
    Its almost been nine years, Ill be in eleventh grade,
    Cant help but want to see you, Until then just be heavens aid.


    Y.O.L.O

  • #2
    Re: I Miss You

    this is a good rap, and i feel sorry for ur loss bro

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    • #3
      Re: I Miss You

      Some real nice lyrics great job man.

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      • #4
        Re: I Miss You

        tight lyrics.

        And crazy’s what they callin’ me, but crazy isn’t hardly what I am
        Try creatively retarded or amazingly rewarded

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        • #5
          Re: I Miss You

          wow so sorry for ur loss bro ,, great lyrics
          "Ok, they say my girl look regular
          But having a bad bitch don’t make you better bruh
          And she don’t diss me like your bitch ass
          She’ll let me fuck your girl and even help me spread that bitch ass"


          Nappy Mula Baby !

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          • #6
            Re: I Miss You

            Originally posted by Jrock23
            Something i wrote for my bro R.I.P

            Little brother, Yeah you know i miss you Nate,
            16 months old, Taken by the hands of Mister fate,
            I promise you though, Ill be on the list of greats,
            Making my lil bro proud, And resisting hate,
            Cant help to reminisce though, On a crisp flow,
            Your curly hair and happiness, I swear youd clap to this,
            I remember the day like yesterday, In second grade,
            You were in a coma, Visiting you and crying my eyes out,
            Holding your cold hand, And saying "Please dont die now",

            Little man, I took your stuffed bear, And slept with it,
            Walked around with it, Held it, Spent every breath with it,
            Until your life was taken, I swear part of me left with it,
            i had something about to unleash, And your death did it,
            I was only eight years old, Discovering fate was cold,
            Made me realize life wasnt just about cake and gold,
            I matured at the age of eight, But I wanted to create some hate,
            Mom made me go to counseling, Then I started to denounce schooling,
            Every action i did revolved around the thought you Nate,
            I still remember saving up my money on Halloween and I bought you a cape,

            At your funeral, I was too scared to cry with the crowd,
            I just closed my eyes and pictured you high in a cloud,
            Doing your little dance in the sky on a cloud,
            Laughing it up, With your sippy cup, I hope you miss me bud,
            Cuz without you my worlds not as fun, You were 16 months of heaven,
            But it wasnt until you got there, That heaven officially begun,

            I just want to tell you that Im doing better lately,
            Those occasional thoughts of you help calm and sedate me,
            Im doing better in school, In fact Im doing greatly,
            Honors classes, Man look what your lil self made me,
            Its almost been nine years, Ill be in eleventh grade,
            Cant help but want to see you, Until then just be heavens aid.
            Nice lyrics and all the other stuff, full of emotion I can tell.
            “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

            -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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            • #7
              Re: I Miss You

              Originally posted by Jrock23
              Something i wrote for my bro R.I.P

              Little brother, Yeah you know i miss you Nate,
              16 months old, Taken by the hands of Mister fate,
              I promise you though, Ill be on the list of greats,
              Making my lil bro proud, And resisting hate,
              Cant help to reminisce though, On a crisp flow,
              Your curly hair and happiness, I swear youd clap to this,
              I remember the day like yesterday, In second grade,
              You were in a coma, Visiting you and crying my eyes out,
              Holding your cold hand, And saying "Please dont die now",

              Little man, I took your stuffed bear, And slept with it,
              Walked around with it, Held it, Spent every breath with it,
              Until your life was taken, I swear part of me left with it,
              i had something about to unleash, And your death did it,
              I was only eight years old, Discovering fate was cold,
              Made me realize life wasnt just about cake and gold,
              I matured at the age of eight, But I wanted to create some hate,
              Mom made me go to counseling, Then I started to denounce schooling,
              Every action i did revolved around the thought you Nate,
              I still remember saving up my money on Halloween and I bought you a cape,

              At your funeral, I was too scared to cry with the crowd,
              I just closed my eyes and pictured you high in a cloud,
              Doing your little dance in the sky on a cloud,
              Laughing it up, With your sippy cup, I hope you miss me bud,
              Cuz without you my worlds not as fun, You were 16 months of heaven,
              But it wasnt until you got there, That heaven officially begun,

              I just want to tell you that Im doing better lately,
              Those occasional thoughts of you help calm and sedate me,
              Im doing better in school, In fact Im doing greatly,
              Honors classes, Man look what your lil self made me,
              Its almost been nine years, Ill be in eleventh grade,
              Cant help but want to see you, Until then just be heavens aid.
              im so srry bout ur loss im tearin up a lil bit readin that.
              Young Mula Bitchez!

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              • #8
                Re: I Miss You

                nice lyrics. and how sad. i feel sorry for you man.

                And crazy’s what they callin’ me, but crazy isn’t hardly what I am
                Try creatively retarded or amazingly rewarded

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