rookie shit

[bouss]

im fresh nd tryn to do ma best
i won't rest till im the best
i want money hoes juvelz nd cars
i want partys where im the star (plö)
im doin everything for it, dig it?
not sure? soon ya gon feel it
ma shit flows to yo ears bit by bit
it' pressure ya brain till ya blaow
wow , holy cow, fuck, this is sumn
sumn dat ya can't miss fo sure
sumn dat ya can't touch fo sure
sumn dat ya can watch fo do
sumn dat ya can diss mo nd mo
he he he im just laughing on that
ya punks wanna be what'cha not
ya jealous bout dat what i got
this is fucking luw not luck
ya can't block me i neva gon stop
ya can't even knock me im like buck

24 pro hoes in a row (i like it)
makin show fo silvabo( shake it)
gogo get low on a flo( naked)
nd do it in slo mo ( make it )

24 pro hoes in a row (i like it)
makin show fo silvabo( shake it)
gogo get low on a flo( nd naked)
i know ya wanna mo do(hmmm okay take it)


i didn't have to grow up bun rabbit and baby sitter
get a gun faggets, aim you head and push the trigger
am much bigger then all of ya togheter
ya aint gon reach where i'l reach ever ever
cuz ma deals are goin better and better
i think i gon settle in the 7th heaven
but there are some bitches who fake
some bitches who hate
some bithces who lies
fuck yo's go home nd good bye
or go to earn some cash fast
with trash bag on nd it has
only one hole in it
fo dicks snitch bitch
ya dig it?
cuz i aint gon give it, jepjep
checkcheck ya have to break my neck
to see me shut up shut up
am gon take off take off
my shiny red cheeked face
and shoot off shoot off
ya smily crooked eyed case, bitch!

am form Estonia so i may have some grammar bugs.
there's 2 different verses and 1 chorus, im gonna make them one thing.
criticise and stuff so i can go on.

silvabog

[weezyavelli]

Re: rookie shit

Pretty good although english isnt your "real language"

Just keep practising and u well be good