Rate this!!

[JMSN]

TrillPhill wrote:
Dress in Gucci from my head to my feet indeed.
Flashy nigga but I still pack heat to make ya bleed.
Cus I got that crack music for all of my fiends.
Tryna make it big in the world...stickin to C.R.E.A.M.

MY PART
YoungMulaCrazy wrote:
and that M.O.B.
you say cash rules every thing around me
i still smoke this grizzle till my hizzle get frizzled
and leave all you dizzled by drizzy for sheezy
and mane im ruling this shit, its quite eazy
you may say my lines cheezy
but im still gettin this chedda
no need to do betta
i murdered this track
and now your face is no longer in tact

[trillphill]

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you would compare something you wrote to 4 lines I dropped in a min or two on Kris' site

[koolkiddale13]

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Nice..

Trillphill Sick..

[trillphill]

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TrillPhill wrote:
Dress in Gucci from my head to my feet indeed.
Flashy nigga but I still pack heat to make ya bleed.
Cus I got that crack music for all of my fiends.
Tryna make it big in the world...stickin to C.R.E.A.M.

MY PART
YoungMulaCrazy wrote:
and that M.O.B.
you say cash rules every thing around me
i still smoke this grizzle till my hizzle get frizzled
and leave all you dizzled by drizzy for sheezy
and mane im ruling this shit, its quite eazy
you may say my lines cheezy
but im still gettin this chedda
no need to do betta
i murdered this track
and now your face is no longer in tact

I added this on at the site, here's my continuation- [I realize the transition from the 2nd to 3rd bar is horrid, but I just fixed it up a bit]

No matter what my attitude stays the same.
I gotta hustle to maintain and live another day.
These lames want me put in the Lost & found.
This is ineffable...not any word nor any sound.
Dreams of standing strong tryna support my family.
But these dreams always end like Martin Luther King's.
Tragic days pass as I lay awake awaitin fate.
I've hit my expiration date...now I'm taken away from this place.

[JMSN]

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i didn't mean for this to be a battle trill
i just wanted people to rate my verse
and since i started off of yours i posted yours
haven't really wrote anything and i thought what i wrote was decent and wanted others to see it

[Reaper]

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I just registered to tell you how much this sucked.

-100/10

Just stop, maybe try again in a few years


ol comin' straight outta the jr. high caf with a stain on ya shirt ass nicca``

[trillphill]

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I just registered to tell you how much this sucked.

-100/10

Just stop, maybe try again in a few years


ol comin' straight outta the jr. high caf with a stain on ya shirt ass nicca``

Ol comin' straight outta the player hater's ball ass nicca. Drop something for us Mr. Kool G Rap

[YungMulaTheImage]

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ik 4 real this guy just fucks in here and criticizes everything ya dig