Something I just recorded, and hoping to re-record and finish soon. Feedback both Positive and Negative would be appreciated. Danke!
http://limelinx.com/files/6c15ea86fa...681cc68df0dead
(verse)
watch as I pick up a pencil, and write my name in the sky.
I'm a grow ass man, these dudes are kids in their minds.
I'm as real as it gets, may the fake drown in a pool of cyanide,
haters can't afford to face the truth, so they pretend to be blind.
I'm striving for the future, the past I left behind.
I'm at the bottom for now, but I'm gearing up for the climb.
hated being wrong, so I tuned up, and got my mind right.
yeah!
uh!
fuck the clock, I don't have enough time to waste my time,
so its overtime all the time for me,
I got to put the work in I'm so hustling,
the money makes sense, and everything else is so confusing.
yeah!
(verse)
the hate is sour, and revenge is so sweet,
keep dragons around me because I spit that gasoline,
talk shit I'll spit on you, then watch your ass burn and bleed,
til you die... suckah!
they say death comes after everybody, man Im still waiting on my turn,
take notes on what I rap about, theres always something you can learn.
when I die, when I die, find me chilling in an urn...
show no fear therefore Im well respected,
got the heart of a warrior, deep in my voice lies the resonance,
slaughter beats leave no evidence,
cops be like why cant this guy just be evident.
Im a hell raiser, god forgive for I have sinned,
send me to war, Ill walk out the champion on one limb,
don't whisper unless you got a secret to pass,
these dudes are gross, gas is the only thing that they be passing on.
pass me the mic, wait! I meant hand the baton,
hip hop darling its my turn,
Its my turn, I promise I wont do you wrong, ...
http://limelinx.com/files/6c15ea86fa...681cc68df0dead
(verse)
watch as I pick up a pencil, and write my name in the sky.
I'm a grow ass man, these dudes are kids in their minds.
I'm as real as it gets, may the fake drown in a pool of cyanide,
haters can't afford to face the truth, so they pretend to be blind.
I'm striving for the future, the past I left behind.
I'm at the bottom for now, but I'm gearing up for the climb.
hated being wrong, so I tuned up, and got my mind right.
yeah!
uh!
fuck the clock, I don't have enough time to waste my time,
so its overtime all the time for me,
I got to put the work in I'm so hustling,
the money makes sense, and everything else is so confusing.
yeah!
(verse)
the hate is sour, and revenge is so sweet,
keep dragons around me because I spit that gasoline,
talk shit I'll spit on you, then watch your ass burn and bleed,
til you die... suckah!
they say death comes after everybody, man Im still waiting on my turn,
take notes on what I rap about, theres always something you can learn.
when I die, when I die, find me chilling in an urn...
show no fear therefore Im well respected,
got the heart of a warrior, deep in my voice lies the resonance,
slaughter beats leave no evidence,
cops be like why cant this guy just be evident.
Im a hell raiser, god forgive for I have sinned,
send me to war, Ill walk out the champion on one limb,
don't whisper unless you got a secret to pass,
these dudes are gross, gas is the only thing that they be passing on.
pass me the mic, wait! I meant hand the baton,
hip hop darling its my turn,
Its my turn, I promise I wont do you wrong, ...