I dont Like the look(willy wonka) Remix

[Hawk]

This is what my buddy did tonight I mixed it for him the track isn't finished as this is just the first verse and more stuff has to be added, and yall should get a kick out of the dj tags on it.

http://usershare.net/votju85ktmnk

Any ideas good or bad let us know and we'll work on it. This is the first track I ever edited for anybody else so let me know whats up.

Hawk

[mykill]

Re: I dont Like the look(willy wonka) Remix

sounds like you're stretching the lines sometimes. I do that a lot. decent 16 though, keep it up

[ItsYNR]

Re: I dont Like the look(willy wonka) Remix

Not bad, could be better... keep it up bro.

[Hawk]

Re: I dont Like the look(willy wonka) Remix

I didn't do anything to the timing of the verses thats how he spit it, there wasn't any mess ups so I didn't have edit the vocals at all just add effects to them.

Hawk

[mykill]

Re: I dont Like the look(willy wonka) Remix

I didn't do anything to the timing of the verses thats how he spit it, there wasn't any mess ups so I didn't have edit the vocals at all just add effects to them.

Hawk

what i'm saying is, it sounds like instead of the lines naturally flowing, you're forcing the timing of them as you say em to fit into the beat. sometimes you hear this a lot from artists, when they want a particular line to fit. but instead of a few times, a majority of them sound like you're stretching em.

[sdotwhiteman]

Re: I dont Like the look(willy wonka) Remix

lol umm its alright
sounds like he just listened to waynes verse in girls on girl
"live on the beach"
maybe he should listen to dr. carter before

"and i come to fix whatever you shall break, where is your originality you are so fake"