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OMFG!!! ITS HERE!! HIGHEST PLATEAU!! 3RD SINGLE LONG AWAITED
Re: OMFG!!! ITS HERE!! HIGHEST PLATEAU!! 3RD SINGLE LONG AWAITED
Production - REALLY needs work...... Cant say much more. Maybe get a new mic, or learn to master better.
Hook - Really boring. Nothing that was catchy or anything like that. The hook should be a sick part of the song. The hook is what you base your song around. Its gotta be better.
Flow - Flow on all the verses was really eh. Try to ride the beat better. And have a more consistent flow. Try to give more energy as well.
Lyrics - Nothing really that stuck out. Kinda were on topic with your hook. But some of the lyrics just came from no where and had nothing to do with the song or verse.
Dont take none of this as a diss or being trying to put you down. Just trying to help man
Re: OMFG!!! ITS HERE!! HIGHEST PLATEAU!! 3RD SINGLE LONG AWAITED
Originally posted by THP850
Production - REALLY needs work...... Cant say much more. Maybe get a new mic, or learn to master better.
Hook - Really boring. Nothing that was catchy or anything like that. The hook should be a sick part of the song. The hook is what you base your song around. Its gotta be better.
Flow - Flow on all the verses was really eh. Try to ride the beat better. And have a more consistent flow. Try to give more energy as well.
Lyrics - Nothing really that stuck out. Kinda were on topic with your hook. But some of the lyrics just came from no where and had nothing to do with the song or verse.
Dont take none of this as a diss or being trying to put you down. Just trying to help man
Yeah man for sure thisll definitely will help me in the future. Thanks for all the comments I've finished my first mixtape so I really can't change any of it but I'm currently working on my 2nd mxitape which I promise will be huge. No joke. And I am trying to just learn from all the mistakes I make from this one you know what i mean?
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