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  • #13
    Re: OMFG!!! ITS HERE!! HIGHEST PLATEAU!! 3RD SINGLE LONG AWAITED

    this gorilla zoe instro rocks. let me get it. good stuff btw

    Gemma Arterton

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    • #14
      Re: OMFG!!! ITS HERE!! HIGHEST PLATEAU!! 3RD SINGLE LONG AWAITED

      Originally posted by KingIDMF
      this gorilla zoe instro rocks. let me get it. good stuff btw
      thanks man really appreciate it

      Originally posted by Tunechi Jr
      Nice.
      thanks a lot man!!

      tha studio is such a dope place!!

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      • #15
        Re: OMFG!!! ITS HERE!! HIGHEST PLATEAU!! 3RD SINGLE LONG AWAITED

        Production - REALLY needs work...... Cant say much more. Maybe get a new mic, or learn to master better.

        Hook - Really boring. Nothing that was catchy or anything like that. The hook should be a sick part of the song. The hook is what you base your song around. Its gotta be better.

        Flow - Flow on all the verses was really eh. Try to ride the beat better. And have a more consistent flow. Try to give more energy as well.

        Lyrics - Nothing really that stuck out. Kinda were on topic with your hook. But some of the lyrics just came from no where and had nothing to do with the song or verse.



        Dont take none of this as a diss or being trying to put you down. Just trying to help man



        protect dunston at all costs

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        • #16
          Re: OMFG!!! ITS HERE!! HIGHEST PLATEAU!! 3RD SINGLE LONG AWAITED

          Originally posted by THP850
          Production - REALLY needs work...... Cant say much more. Maybe get a new mic, or learn to master better.

          Hook - Really boring. Nothing that was catchy or anything like that. The hook should be a sick part of the song. The hook is what you base your song around. Its gotta be better.

          Flow - Flow on all the verses was really eh. Try to ride the beat better. And have a more consistent flow. Try to give more energy as well.

          Lyrics - Nothing really that stuck out. Kinda were on topic with your hook. But some of the lyrics just came from no where and had nothing to do with the song or verse.



          Dont take none of this as a diss or being trying to put you down. Just trying to help man
          Yeah man for sure thisll definitely will help me in the future. Thanks for all the comments I've finished my first mixtape so I really can't change any of it but I'm currently working on my 2nd mxitape which I promise will be huge. No joke. And I am trying to just learn from all the mistakes I make from this one you know what i mean?

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          • #17
            Re: OMFG!!! ITS HERE!! HIGHEST PLATEAU!! 3RD SINGLE LONG AWAITED

            bumpp

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            • #18
              Re: OMFG!!! ITS HERE!! HIGHEST PLATEAU!! 3RD SINGLE LONG AWAITED

              I think it had a very old school feel, which I liked and a nice hook Didnt really like the second guy though.

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              • #19
                Re: OMFG!!! ITS HERE!! HIGHEST PLATEAU!! 3RD SINGLE LONG AWAITED

                Originally posted by MC_Crary
                I think it had a very old school feel, which I liked and a nice hook Didnt really like the second guy though.
                arightt opinions r welcome can u tell me wat u didnt like?

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