HOT NEW TRACK!!! YUNG N RUTHLESS!!!

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: HOT NEW TRACK!!! YUNG N RUTHLESS!!!

DAWG, IMMA BE STRAIGHT UP REAL WITH YOU AND EVERY PERSON THAT I COMMENT ON ON THIS SITE

POSITIVES: YOU HAVE A UNIQUE VOICE, IT SOUNDS GOOD FOR AN OLD SCHOOL TYPE SONG, BUT I LIKE YOUR RAP VOICE, AND THAT WAS A NICE BEAT.

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: YOUR FLOW IS OFF, LIKE ITS ALL OVER THE PLACE, AND HARD TO FOLLOW, AND I NOTICED ON ALOTTA YOUR SONGS, UR OFF BEAT, BUT IF U WERE ON BEAT, IT WOULD BE HOTTER. ALSO U TALKIN ABOUT GUNS AND SHOOTIN ALOT, WHICH I DOUBT U HAVE ONE, BUT I GUESS IF U JUST RAPPIN ABOUT IT JUST BECUZ MANY RAPPERS DO THAT, OH WELL.

BOTTOM LINE..... JUST WORK ON YOUR FLOW , AND STAY ON BEAT, NICE VOICE

[no lungs18]

Re: HOT NEW TRACK!!! YUNG N RUTHLESS!!!

[quote=ItsYNR]

you have no flow whatsoever, it is really hard listening to your songs lol

hmmm

you have no flow or cadence, i dont know why people lie to you and say this is good lol
just stop honestly its embarrassing

I think your mad, and it's okay, cause i must be doing something right if your getting mad. Thanks bro.[/quote:2yx5g4t0]

hey thats my bad bro, my hatin ass friend was the one who left those whack comments. he doesnt make any sense, keep doin ur thing man i like the tracks

[ItsYNR]

Re: HOT NEW TRACK!!! YUNG N RUTHLESS!!!

DAWG, IMMA BE STRAIGHT UP REAL WITH YOU AND EVERY PERSON THAT I COMMENT ON ON THIS SITE

POSITIVES: YOU HAVE A UNIQUE VOICE, IT SOUNDS GOOD FOR AN OLD SCHOOL TYPE SONG, BUT I LIKE YOUR RAP VOICE, AND THAT WAS A NICE BEAT.

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: YOUR FLOW IS OFF, LIKE ITS ALL OVER THE PLACE, AND HARD TO FOLLOW, AND I NOTICED ON ALOTTA YOUR SONGS, UR OFF BEAT, BUT IF U WERE ON BEAT, IT WOULD BE HOTTER. ALSO U TALKIN ABOUT GUNS AND SHOOTIN ALOT, WHICH I DOUBT U HAVE ONE, BUT I GUESS IF U JUST RAPPIN ABOUT IT JUST BECUZ MANY RAPPERS DO THAT, OH WELL.

BOTTOM LINE..... JUST WORK ON YOUR FLOW , AND STAY ON BEAT, NICE VOICE

This is what i like to hear man, THANK YOU SO MUCH, this is like feeding me im only going get better thanks alot bro.


[quote=no lungs18][quote=ItsYNR]

you have no flow whatsoever, it is really hard listening to your songs lol

hmmm

you have no flow or cadence, i dont know why people lie to you and say this is good lol
just stop honestly its embarrassing

I think your mad, and it's okay, cause i must be doing something right if your getting mad. Thanks bro.[/quote:emgpgxag]

hey thats my bad bro, my hatin ass friend was the one who left those whack comments. he doesnt make any sense, keep doin ur thing man i like the tracks[/quote:emgpgxag]

It's cool, and thanks.

[KishanLad]

Re: HOT NEW TRACK!!! YUNG N RUTHLESS!!!

You've layed out some good beats, kudos to whoever produced them. I think, let people have said before, you just need to work on your flow and you'll hit this off pretty well. You've got a good strong voice, rough to the point and standing your mic to make people listen... just the flow dude haha. Flow on beats, record, playback and just work on it as much as you can. But I'll support your tapes/albums/EPs to get you off the line man!

[ItsYNR]

Re: HOT NEW TRACK!!! YUNG N RUTHLESS!!!

You've layed out some good beats, kudos to whoever produced them. I think, let people have said before, you just need to work on your flow and you'll hit this off pretty well. You've got a good strong voice, rough to the point and standing your mic to make people listen... just the flow dude haha. Flow on beats, record, playback and just work on it as much as you can. But I'll support your tapes/albums/EPs to get you off the line man!

Thanks alot bro.

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: HOT NEW TRACK!!! YUNG N RUTHLESS!!!

like i say on most of your other songs "hott track".....i see u like takin the 50 cent approach for attention lol i aint mad atcha

[ItsYNR]

Re: HOT NEW TRACK!!! YUNG N RUTHLESS!!!

like i say on most of your other songs "hott track".....i see u like takin the 50 cent approach for attention lol i aint mad atcha

50 Cent is one of my fav, rappers. lol.


Anyways thanks too bro.