Beginner rapper: Rate this lil' song I just wrote.

[ATLien666]

Re: Beginner rapper: Rate this lil' song I just wrote.

i dont know if you master your tracks or if someone else does but your vocals are a bit high.you could also use a couple effects too. just helping you out bro!

Yeah, I did these myself. But right on, I appreciate all feedback, especially if it's constructive.

I'mma try to mess with some effects for this song I just did.

[JMSN]

Re: Beginner rapper: Rate this lil' song I just wrote.

effects i use are master limiter, EQ, and Vocal Compressor. and sometimes i throw in AutoTune but not much LOL

[ATLien666]

Re: Beginner rapper: Rate this lil' song I just wrote.

effects i use are master limiter, EQ, and Vocal Compressor. and sometimes i throw in AutoTune but not much LOL

What program do you record with?

[JMSN]

Re: Beginner rapper: Rate this lil' song I just wrote.

i use mixcraft 5 brah.

[ATLien666]

Re: Beginner rapper: Rate this lil' song I just wrote.

No shit?

I'm messing with Mixcraft 4 now, I'm still tryna get this mastering thing under control, lol.

[ATLien666]

Re: Beginner rapper: Rate this lil' song I just wrote.

Ugh, I need a mastering program.

[PrizeBeatz]

Re: Beginner rapper: Rate this lil' song I just wrote.

Yeah man, thats a lot to bite right there. Big song lmao

flow:3/5
punchlines2/5
overall lyrics:4/5
other notes: i really liked this one. Had this whole story goin on in it.
Overall score:3/5

[moneymarc454]

Re: Beginner rapper: Rate this lil' song I just wrote.

its pretty good. and you only took 15 min impressive.

[kadillak]

Re: Beginner rapper: Rate this lil' song I just wrote.

Haven't given any of your songs in this thread a listen ... just read through some of the lyrics. Impressive stuff. I like that there's an obvious message and focus in every verse ... you're not all over the place with random punchlines. There were parts where I'd find myself kinda dozing off while reading through a part of the verse not because it wasn't good, just that some parts were too wordy even though I appreciate the more complicated structure of your lines. Can't really comment on your flow, 'cus like I said, I haven't listened. You should post more recent stuff.