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  • Over Remix - Jay Real & Dispatcher/GJR

    The First song we made, download and give me feedback

    Hulkshare.com Over (Mastered) 1.mp3

    p.s. my mixtape coming soon Called "The Appetizer"
    email: njayr21@gmail.com for beats for my mixtape, ill shout yall out in the song if i use your beat

  • #2
    Re: Over Remix - Jay Real & Dispatcher/GJR

    nice punchlines flow was ehh but sometimes u picked it up.. the hook u sounded like u were sleepy. need better quality.. but this is really good for the first song u made, my first song wasnt even close to this so good job

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    • #3
      Re: Over Remix - Jay Real & Dispatcher/GJR

      Originally posted by Jamerson View Post
      nice punchlines flow was ehh but sometimes u picked it up.. the hook u sounded like u were sleepy. need better quality.. but this is really good for the first song u made, my first song wasnt even close to this so good job
      Thanks Bro, really appreciate it. we were using garageband so that explains the quality. but i appreciate you taking the time to download and listen.

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      • #4
        Re: Over Remix - Jay Real & Dispatcher/GJR

        Pretty cool song, but you gotta work on the hook.

        Throw dirt on me, and grow a wild flower
        But it's fuck the world, get a child out her
        Yeah my life a bitch, but you know nothing 'bout her
        Been to Hell and back, I can show you vouchers

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        • #5
          Re: Over Remix - Jay Real & Dispatcher/GJR

          Originally posted by SWaGGa KiiNG View Post
          Pretty cool song, but you gotta work on the hook.
          yeah i know ahah im not for singing

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          • #6
            Re: Over Remix - Jay Real & Dispatcher/GJR

            Originally posted by JayReal21 View Post
            yeah i know ahah im not for singing
            haha i gotcha

            Throw dirt on me, and grow a wild flower
            But it's fuck the world, get a child out her
            Yeah my life a bitch, but you know nothing 'bout her
            Been to Hell and back, I can show you vouchers

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            • #7
              Re: Over Remix - Jay Real & Dispatcher/GJR

              well sometimes is also about the microphone... and getting used to recording
              what mic u have?

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