Dreezy Baby - Unforgivable

[DreezyBaby]

LimeLinx - Preview - Unforgivable (Snippet).mp3

yes, here's a snippet of the song, I'm just on the 1st verse.
But it's all me on the hook.
Here's what the hook is saying:

I’m just doing my own thang, but the haters keep on hating on me
Ask the money,that I been stacking my paper homie
Been a beast & still screaming fuck the world, fool
And while I'm at it, I might as well fuck ya girl too
Cuz
She thinks of me (I can't help it nigga)
She thinks of me (I can't help it nigga)
She thinks of me (I can't help it nigga)
(I can't help it nigga) x2
Cuz I'm trying to be unforgivable

[Pestrator]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Unforgivable

its pretty good bro

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Unforgivable

its pretty good bro

thanks cuhz. the full is nuts

[lovalle]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Unforgivable

your flow is pretty good, the chorus is just a little boring, but it sounds like it'll be a good song

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Unforgivable

cool story bro,

u should get a singer though for the chorus lmao,

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Unforgivable

@lovalle, preciate it.
@lilchukie, hahah yeah im not a singer, but oh well

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Unforgivable

@lovalle, preciate it.
@lilchukie, hahah yeah im not a singer, but oh well

try autotune

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Unforgivable

try autotune

i did kinda

[Jamerson]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Unforgivable

like ppl said, that hook needs work
youve dropped half of ur mixtape already..



you need to give feedback in tha studio. havent seen any from u really

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Unforgivable

like ppl said, that hook needs work
youve dropped half of ur mixtape already..



you need to give feedback in tha studio. havent seen any from u really

not nearly half, theres over 20 songs hahaha

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Unforgivable

i did kinda

what u mean kinda?? u sayin u used autotune and it still sound like that???

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Unforgivable

Flow/ Weezy.
Lyrics/ Nothing i haven't heard.
Overall/ 2/10