Dead Presidents (Taylor Swift Freestyle)

[AvengingTheKnight]

http://www.Youtube.com/watch?v=ovngp...layer_embedded


Constructive Criticism, please be detailed in what I need to improve on.

Keepnin mind, this is a freestyle lol

[Jamerson]

Re: Dead Presidents (Taylor Swift Freestyle)

the video doesnt work .

[AvengingTheKnight]

Re: Dead Presidents (Taylor Swift Freestyle)

I think I fixed it. or you can post the title into youtube

[Jamerson]

Re: Dead Presidents (Taylor Swift Freestyle)

you dont know how to post a youtube link? yeahh i searched it myself YouTube - Dead Presidents.wmv
but,

first you need better mic, or a mic if u were recording with ur pc's mic .
i could barely hear on max .. but reading the lyrics helped ..
lyrics were nice, flow was weak. but thats a good off the dome freestyle if it was

[heartbreak drake]

Re: Dead Presidents (Taylor Swift Freestyle)

u copy a lot of drakes lines lol and its okay sometimes u dont even rhyme but its okay for ur first time ull get better just need to practice a lot and sometimes u legit just stop and mumble lol

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Dead Presidents (Taylor Swift Freestyle)

Flow/ It was good. Could of been better.
Lyrics/ Greats lyrics man.
Overall/ 5/10

[AvengingTheKnight]

Re: Dead Presidents (Taylor Swift Freestyle)

Yeah I always end up Stealing a few lines when freestyling <__<

If I had a good voice, I think I would be amazing because my written material is alot better
I'm having trouble finding my voice. I sound high as hell here.