My Verse- No Title

[YoungMoneyEnt]

I just feel like rapping, so i don't need a title.
Tryna stand out, while yall mixed like some files.
I try to stay unique,and keep a good physique.
And don't even trip, I still haven't reached my peak.
wow, I'm so zooted up and I ain't coming down.
I ain't waving no flag, but I throw down the crown.
Bet I fire rounds, at all these fucking niggas.
Fucking doubt me, I respond as I pull the trigger.
They call me FJH don't you dare forget initials.
I never fucking stop, I play AFTER the whistle
And yeah I always shoot, I'm playing halo wit the pistol.
If anyone talking shit, you can get a fucking fistful
I can kill any rapper, wanna put that on a bet?
Search my dictionary, ain't no such thing as debt.
D-O-C my boy, that's til the fucking death.
And hello I am Haikes, I'm one hell of a threat.

This was just random lines, no meaning in it.
Wasn't my best at all.. but yeah








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[Jamerson]

Re: My Verse- No Title

flow - wasnt the best, threw me off when rhymes changed
punchlines/metaphores/similes - were okay
other - it was a quickie so it isnt that serious so its okay
overall - 2.5/5

dont take it personal!! i know ur real shit

[ProBitaz.]

Re: My Verse- No Title

Flow: okay flow, a little off sometimes
Punchlines/Similes/Metaphors: 75% out of 100
Overall Lyrics: good
Overall/Rating: 3/5

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: My Verse- No Title

Hot For Something You Didnt Really Try On

Flow: It Was Good Wasnt Bad I Had To Go Back And Read A Couple Times
Punchlines/Similes/Metaphors:Not Alot Of Them But Thats Okay
Other Notes Hot For Something You Didnt Really Try On
Overall/Rating:7/10