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    Where does love come from, lemme tell ya I know
    I thought I had it all, from the head to the toe
    I had to give so much, no less Vincent Van Gogh
    It don't come from soul, nor the heart or mind
    Ya gotta have dough, because Love is Blind
    It's not something true, trust me I learned
    I tried so hard, but I only got burned
    The way to keep happy, give money and gold
    Heart does nothing, you have to be bold
    You think love is enough, your about to get scold
    How does it sound, she whispers I Love You
    It probly feels good, but shes full of bull poo
    All it is is bad weather, sound like you Heather
    All that you promised, you said we'd be together
    You even said these words, together forever
    Guess you didn't mean that whatsoever
    Stay out, don't come back, ever

    This is a lot deeper rap than I've posted before, I hate to say it was rushed but it definitly came to me alot faster than most because how big of an issue this was in my life... Feedback Appreciated

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    Yo tell the world to hold their breath...
    Their breathing the wrong air...
    This world belongs to me and this hippie with long hair...

  • #2
    Re: Blind Love

    Originally posted by BBeasley View Post
    Where does love come from, lemme tell ya I know
    I thought I had it all, from the head to the toe
    I had to give so much, no less Vincent Van Gogh
    It don't come from soul, nor the heart or mind
    Ya gotta have dough, because Love is Blind
    It's not something true, trust me I learned
    I tried so hard, but I only got burned
    The way to keep happy, give money and gold
    Heart does nothing, you have to be bold
    You think love is enough, your about to get scold
    How does it sound, she whispers I Love You
    It probly feels good, but shes full of bull poo
    All it is is bad weather, sound like you Heather
    All that you promised, you said we'd be together
    You even said these words, together forever
    Guess you didn't mean that whatsoever
    Stay out, don't come back, ever

    This is a lot deeper rap than I've posted before, I hate to say it was rushed but it definitly came to me alot faster than most because how big of an issue this was in my life... Feedback Appreciated

    Feedback 1

    Feedback 2

    It was great poetry, I enjoyed the whole verse practically.
    Last edited by KrispyKreme; 06-23-2010, 08:25 AM.

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    • #3
      Re: Blind Love

      It wasn't the best i've heard but it was aight bro!

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      • #4
        Re: Blind Love

        Flow: 5/5
        Punchlines/Similes/Metaphors: 5/5
        Overall Lyrics: 99,999/5
        Other Notes: Deep poetry bro, extremely deep. I think I learned a lesson from this.
        Overall/Rating: 999,999/5

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