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Mr. FTP Flow: You stayed with the beat throughout your verse. Try showing more emotion in your voice. Lyrics: The lyrics were on point and had some real shit with some great metaphors. Other Notes: I don't think that your first single for your debut mixtape should have included a feature. You should have added another verse as well. Overall/Rating: 4/5
Young Fire Flow: Your flow was on point as well. You have a bit more emotion in your voice than FTP, but there is room for improvement. Lyrics: Nice lyrics overall with some great metaphors and punchlines. Other Notes: I hope you bring some sick lyrics to the written tournament. Overall/Rating: 4.5/5
Overall/Rating: Great single with a nice hook! 4/5
Flow:yall were on beat yall just need some more emotion
Lyrics:god lyrics form both of yall keep it up
overall: good track i think it was a smart pick for a first singel bc its a very good song n its catchy, since it is ur song n a single i think u should have doen another verse after yf but its all good bc it still works like the way it is 4/5 good work! =)
the reason it's the single is because its getting attention towards my name. and Young Fire is my homie. i had to put him on this beat, i heard it and thought YF&FTP collab. and it worked out well, i cant believe nobody has said anything about the Cover
but thanks for the feedback everyone!
I don't really like this song too much, I think FTP and YF killed it, verses and flow was on point, it just sounded too bright for an FTP song. Ive heard some sick killa lines from you FTP, I expected something a little more sinister for your first s
Mr. FTP
Flow: On point I think if you work at youre could be really good.
Lyrics: Good shit
YF
Flow: You keep getting better and better bro. Nice flow.
Lyrics. On point. Nice punchlines
the reason it's the single is because its getting attention towards my name. and Young Fire is my homie. i had to put him on this beat, i heard it and thought YF&FTP collab. and it worked out well, i cant believe nobody has said anything about the Cover
but thanks for the feedback everyone!
I worry more about the music than the cover art. lol
FTP: best song i have heard from you. i listened to a couple of your other ones and never really like them but this song has changed my mnd about you. you have gotten better. flow was good and the lyrics where straight. like to hear more from you. keep it up
Young Fire: you keep getting better. your lyrics have gotten better. flow was on point. ya'll make good collabo's. you sound a lot better than you use too
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