Dreezy Baby - Light World

[DreezyBaby]

this isn't finished yet
but just to give an idea...

Download: LimeLinx - Preview - Light World (Snippet).mp3




Lyrics:

World changing, girl tripping
My girl changing, my world different
Feeling stupid, having no clue what to do these days
Momma on back, mindstate in a newly phase
My life emotions, a movie, it's feeling truley staged
You trying to escape, but my hearts encouraging you to stay
I'm confused, I'm stuck, starting to feel out of luck
The blows don't phase me any more, I just feel a sour punch
Girl please understand, no need to overlook
Raw but I was done, came to her I was overcooked
Game trying to change me, I'm trying to stay my ownself
Time ending soon, forget you dudes I got my own health
No need for war no more, the fight haven't begun yet
Bright future ahead, I'm trying to obtain what the sun get
Nevermind my bad side, pay attention to my intentions
Did I mention I'm in extention for penny pinching
Man these losers mad, trying to say I'm past that
Heaven where I'm at, hell I been, no Affleck
This is not a nightmare, but it's far from a dream
I could you lend you my eyes, still have no clue what I've seen






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[KingIDMF]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Light World

Now this right here is good bro. I would be so down to hop on the remix. Its different as compared to your other material, the lyrics are dope. Flow is kind of outta balance, but like you said its unfinished. keep it up.

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Light World

Now this right here is good bro. I would be so down to hop on the remix. Its different as compared to your other material, the lyrics are dope. Flow is kind of outta balance, but like you said its unfinished. keep it up.

thanks bro, it's very different. appreciate the feedback

[Pestrator]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Light World

good to se ur tryn somehintg new ur vocals need to be higgher ur flow is kinda sloppy but it doest sem like ur off beat so just make ur vocals higher n ull b set i think

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Light World

good to se ur tryn somehintg new ur vocals need to be higgher ur flow is kinda sloppy but it doest sem like ur off beat so just make ur vocals higher n ull b set i think

see i have no clue kinda what that means :/ i dont edit my stuff
but i'll be sure to have it fixed or whatever. it'll sound better than this i know

[Jamerson]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Light World

floww was ehh.. lyrics are one of the few u stayed on subject..
re do this and make it dope

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Light World

wow, very different

i guess u can change it up , this is epic. i havnt heard this kinda stuff from anyone else.
good stuff.

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Light World

wow, very different

i guess u can change it up , this is epic. i havnt heard this kinda stuff from anyone else.
good stuff.

thanks my nigg! stayed on the look!
more shit like this coming

[Pestrator]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Light World

see i have no clue kinda what that means :/ i dont edit my stuff
but i'll be sure to have it fixed or whatever. it'll sound better than this i know

lol it was hard to explain it was just diff n it kinda seemed liek ur flow was off n sloppy n u need to put the vocals higher or whoever does the ediitin for u

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Light World

Flow: 1/5
Lyrics: 3/5
Overall: 3/5

Still kinda sounding like weezy if you can just stop that..

[Fireman007]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Light World

flow 3/5 flow was decent but like someone said earlier it was a little "sloppy"
lyrics 4/5 stayed on subject and went with the mood of the beat
overal 3/5 overall good song not much to complain about

[@WHOZMERCY]

Re: Dreezy Baby - Light World

decent, like your style